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    confidentially pleased cacian's Avatar
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    wishing well

    life is not
    visible to the
    naked eye
    palpable may not
    be solvable
    it is a trial
    without a file

    the sky is too high
    to state and supply
    it's impossible to deny

    what is evident
    is the million
    resident to
    stay alive reticent
    time
    the
    chemical of convenience
    happy to apply
    a lenience

    you and i reply
    life is an experience
    no human would wish it
    inconvenience
    Last edited by cacian; 06-20-2017 at 08:30 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    Love this poem cacian, especially:

    "it is a trial
    without a file"

    "the sky is too high
    to state and supply
    it's impossible to deny"

    "time
    the
    chemical of convenience
    happy to apply
    a lenience"

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor STATELY
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    I agree that life isn't visible to the naked eye and life is an experience. Nice sound.

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    On the road, but not! Danik 2016's Avatar
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    And I agree that "no human would wish it
    inconvenience".
    "You can always find something better than death."
    Jacob and Wilhelm Grimm, The Bremen Town Musicians

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