Deadline: 1-more week or so... I'm thinking end of Tuesday... I guess that's 2-Tuesdays from now...4/19 PDT.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Deadline: 1-more week or so... I'm thinking end of Tuesday... I guess that's 2-Tuesdays from now...4/19 PDT.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 04-10-2016 at 12:07 AM.
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed both poems very much.
YesNo - Enjoyed the poetics of your piece: A worthy quatrain (4X10) with an AABA rhyme scheme utilizing enjambment.
Pendragon - A poem perhaps depicting the Kipling era; eliciting the 2nd Boer War (googled) and the consequence of stirring up ill will with the natives, luckily a safe distance away. Kipling might have gone with a rhyming scheme (as in "Fuzzy-Wuzzy" http://www.bartleby.com/246/1128.html ), but your short form gives just enough to satisfy without rhyme.
Tough call... going with Pendragon on this one. Congratulations to both !
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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