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    Ceremony of the Dead

    Ceremony of the Dead

    The vultures
    all dressed in black
    stand in procession,
    a sea of pale faces
    rain streaked,
    yet they cry no tears.

    Another mockery
    of ceremony,
    the crowed gathered round
    in distilled grief.

    Bored faces
    with yawning eyes
    in attendance
    according to a sense of duty.

    Watching as if they
    themselves have gone stiff,
    feeling the weight of the
    earth pile on their heads.

    Still the old vultures
    crow on their useless
    words with shining
    bald heads taunting
    like the grins
    of the dead.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    This is, I think, a highly evocative and I suspect acutely observed, poem, Muse. I particularly liked:

    Another mockery
    of ceremony,
    the crowed gathered round
    in distilled grief.

    In fact it's full of memorable lines. Thanks

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    Thank you!

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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