I'm a beginner so I really need your honest opinion on my poem!
Be honest and unmerciful!
Life - in a Round, Womanly Glass
Half a glass of clear, red wine
its pacific surface mirrors millions of different things
from each angle one dares to try.
So dare on, my friend
but take care
you might just see
the half-full glass...empty.
So start some waves
drink up
if so, more wondrous things will be revealed!
P.S.: Further on I've posted some new poems...so read on!