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    ~Chicago Picnic (1925)~

    Seven mobsters
    and one pigeon
    spread a blanket on the grass.

    Their basket contains cheese,
    wine, and sourdough French bread
    all the way from San Francisco.

    "'Frisco fog,
    Mr. Capone explains to the pigeon,
    is the crucial ingredient of this loaf."

    Then Bruno breaks
    one of the pigeon's wings,
    then breaks
    the other one.

    Louie the Face
    takes the pigeon to the river.

    Mr. Capone
    walks alone down a narrow trail
    into the trees.

    "My father never hugged me."
    He muses,
    then picks up a stick,
    to use as a cane,
    although he doesn't really
    need it.
    "People who believe a lot of crap are better off." Charles Bukowski

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    The contrast of the images in this along with the dry delivery create quite a macabre scene, ala David Lynch.

    Very well done!

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