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    Queen

    Her sweet voice echoes within the walls of my heart.
    Her words vibrate in the rooms of my soul.
    Her whisper gives me a sweet sensation.
    Her laugh is my true elation.

    She is the queen of my dreams.
    In our castle of licorice and jelly beans.
    Life is palm trees and beautiful sunsets.
    A perfect surfing wave and a cool drink that's wet.

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    Wow this is very good I like it alot!
    "Listen closely and at the end you'll be someone else."

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    Life is imagined like that but rarely lived like that.

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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    That second line of the second stanza is golden. I really should write more love poems to impress the girls with...
    "As far as we can discern, the sole purpose of human existence is to kindle a light of meaning in the darkness of mere being." --Carl Gustav Jung

    "To absent friends, lost loves, old gods, and the season of mists; and may each and every one of us always give the devil his due." --Neil Gaiman; The Sandman Vol. 4: Season of Mists

    "I'm on my way, from misery to happiness today. Uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh, uh-huh" --The Proclaimers

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    I love this queen that wrote with gold letters


    thanks to you for your poem

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