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    Thinking

    My mind an Altamira cave
    Colours and shapes
    Find communion in darkness
    A light illuminates
    Occasionally and I see
    A design, a pattern,
    But lightly formed
    Like some faded painting.
    Animals, edges, angles
    Circles, spots, spaces.
    Representation
    Is a second creation.
    Without light, did
    We enter another world
    Of mutability?
    Only a narrative
    Is needed, words
    We fail to find.

    Come out of the cave
    Scribble on rock
    Inscribe upon stone
    And let it stand
    For all to see.

    The sun pours out
    A river of light
    That makes
    A salmon sea
    Just like that first
    Fauvist work
    By Matisse.

    Perfection fills
    Our tired eyes
    In a glimpse
    Of something
    Rare and fleeting
    A connection,
    A line, an image
    Dessiccated in a second.

    We rest in that
    Opiate-like state
    Of relaxed weariness,
    Calm in act and thought,
    Observers of self and world,
    Slowly filling with bliss.

    And then silence
    Returns to embrace
    Each structure
    Like the clearing
    Of a Quaker mind,
    And we are left
    With nothing but
    Liquid memories
    Seeping away from
    The worn topsoil.
    As alien as another
    Culture, religion.

    Inside Dali's brain
    A Pantheon-like head
    Explodes into the world
    Of my mind.
    I excavate the rubble
    Piece together
    The spaces in between
    And I am outside
    Gazing up at
    The Sagrada Familia,
    Whilst lying beside you
    Staring at the sea
    From Hartland Quay Hotel.
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    Vidyanjali
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    Wow! This sounds interesting! Hey check out my poem something similar to this by clicking the URL below...

    http://www.poemhunter.com/p/m/poem.a...4&poem=1841405

    Vidyanjali.
    Let's enlighten one another...!

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    emmyB
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    that was absoloutely amazing, i loved that! it flows so well, its perfect. am going to see if you have anymore work on here to read, i like your style.
    EmmyB

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    Thanks,

    Glad you both liked my poem.

    AP
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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