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    Glass doll

    Verse:
    your glass doll bleeds your name in your
    empty rooms on the panes she has
    scratched your name she sits in the
    window laughing at the moon.

    chorus:
    rocking chair rocking chair do you hear
    footsteps on the empty stair do you
    rock back and forth to the screams
    of a dead childs unanswered prayer


    verse:
    your glass doll planted glass flowers
    your fragrance invades her glass dreams
    in the dolls head we can see your last hours
    glass friends scream your final screams


    bridge:
    the glass doll rocks in the chair
    searching for a final prayer.
    the glass doll rocks in the chair
    searching for a final prayer.

    Verse:
    your glass doll sleeps on your grave
    glass friends lay glass reefs
    they smash with the real grief
    from the frenzied winds that rave.

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    This is almost intolerably sad, but handled so deftly and without the least bit of mawkishness. Well done!

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