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    I Laugh The Laugh Of Hades As I Go

    Though on this bed my limbs and digits lay
    In honored supplication to the day
    I also pray humility to night
    Which soon but for the moon shall have no sight;
    And from the dark my voice shall speak aloud
    As if a brother taken to the crowd
    Though weak and smothered under dark hued shroud
    I shall not show my shame but speak up proud
    As all can see the flicker of my flame
    With hue now burning blue in sad refrain.

    Thou cannot see my smile shine all the while?
    Yet surely it doth come from inner style
    For style is that subjective born of pain
    And too it falls from skies like sudden rain
    In search of gravity and glory's gain;
    Like ten thousand needles sharp, a-kin of skin,
    Each a silver-threaded pearl washed in sin
    Reminding me of history I know
    Still filled with passion's guilt and lover's woe -
    I laugh the laugh of Hades as I go!
    Last edited by easyeverett; 02-22-2009 at 11:13 AM.

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    God, you sure do write gloriously in iambic pentameter! I'm not sure what you're saying but you're saying it beautifully!
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    Very nice Everret. I enjoyed that. You do write wonderful iambic pentameter, and not just iambic pentameter but heroic couplets. I take it you've read Alexander Pope.
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    SO impressed here, Easy. ... I'm not quite sure what you're saying either, but I'm still very impressed!
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