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    write poem with this words

    This are the words that you must to use and it isn't necessary in this sequence

    red hair girl
    smile
    sunflower
    lake
    wish bell
    castle
    beautiful

    good luck

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    The beautiful red haired girl,
    With a smile like a sunflower
    Lives by the lake in a castle
    I wish her bell tolled for me
    But dreams can go unanswered...

    Pendragon
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    From the sunflower castle
    came the fairy with her wish bell
    where she found the beautiful
    red-haired girl beside the lake
    and greeted her with a smile

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    at castle lake

    at castle lake a
    red hair girl beguiles
    her beautiful smile
    a sigh from a
    sunflower
    fulfilling wishes
    bells and whistles
    a body of water

    5/25/2020

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Beautiful girl
    sunflower girl
    kept, alas, in the castle

    Your smile sounds wish bells

    your red hair haunts

    the silver lake.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    a red hair girl

    With anticipation I rang the wish bell
    down by the old enchanted wishing well
    down on my luck not having a coin to toss
    into the chasm lined with moss -
    a red hair girl soon answered my ring

    With a beautiful smile, a piece of string
    she led me to a fairy castle down by a lake
    I became hers upon that string that never did break
    a soaring sunflower where e'er the wind would blow
    forever tethered to the red hair girl below

    4/29/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    The wish bell rings
    in the sunflower castle
    as the red hair girl
    sinks
    with a smile
    into
    the beautiful lake.


    New words:
    Night
    Ghost
    Secret garden
    Glow-worm
    Car
    Last edited by Danik 2016; 05-04-2022 at 10:30 AM.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Dismalites:
    Night / Ghost / Secret garden / Glow-worm / Car

    Just a short car ride away from Phil Campbell
    (Alabama)
    after twilight unknown constellations gleam off the
    shining
    sandstone walls of Dismals Canyon - a mysterious
    Secret
    garden comes to life - Glow-worms emit bright blue-
    green
    lights as they hang from glistened webs bedewed and
    bejeweled
    from moist slime each night like fireflies (though not in
    flight) -
    Each guest gropes ghost like with torches, red or
    white,
    wending their way through this magical spectral
    site
    to catch a glimpse of the rare Glow-worm nymphs
    aglow

    5/5/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
    Last edited by tailor STATELY; 05-05-2022 at 12:07 PM. Reason: format
    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    INspiredI Liked the images.

    Night / Ghost / Secret garden / Glow-worm / Car

    Topsy Turvy

    Ghosts glide through the night
    Headlights ablaze
    Somewhere
    In the secret garden
    Cars
    Turn into glow-worms.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    New words:

    hieroglyphs
    balloon
    moon
    mango
    fly
    wisteria
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    To the Moon !!! hieroglyphs / balloon / moon / mango / fly / wisteria

    the hieroglyphs were quite clear
    escribed by Timotheses the charioteer
    instructions to fly to the moon !
    - that being said I thought - to the infinities;
    to facilitate meeting with his divinities

    a wisteria pod nine days old, as it were,
    mango root mashed and mixed with myrrh
    in equal portions then shaken, not stirred
    applied to the basket of a balloon
    all prepared for one's flight before noon

    so I tried this concoction (trying to envision
    where he'd gotten a balloon) and without revision
    applied it to the basket of my craft christened Ra
    and up we rose in a stench I could barely endure
    (to be honest the mess smelled like manure)

    be that as it may we rose! we soared ! the stench
    filled my nostrils - permeating my pores; in French
    I uttered something profane before I lost my mind
    and passed out as the balloon took its head
    and to this day I live on the moon, neither alive nor dead

    ... and Timotheses? I kick his butt every time I can

    5/6/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    This poem made my day! Laughed my head off. Pre apocalyptical sense of humor.

    Roon's Dilemma

    Roon couldn't stop thinking about the balloon
    It was just so blue and white and round
    But he could never forget the moon.

    That morning, Roon was shocked by a fly
    He had to calm himself with a turnaround
    Roon couldn't stop thinking about the balloon

    Later, Roon was spooked by the moon
    He tried to focus on his hieroglyphs
    But he could never forget the balloon

    wisteria tried to distract him with a prune
    Said his mind had become too profound
    Roon couldn't stop thinking about the balloon

    Roon decided to do something at noon
    The moon was like a toxic ground
    But he could never forget the moon

    Roon nosedived so very soon
    His mind turned into a pound
    Roon couldn't stop thinking about the balloon
    But he could never forget the moon.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Lol... glad you enjoyed my offering

    A villanelle ! I like the name Roon (Rune) in parallel with hieroglyph.

    re: "Topsy Turvy"... I like the idea that "Cars / Turn into glow-worms."

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Thanks!
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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