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    Mmmhm.. A short one..

    Everytime I go to sleep
    I think that sleep will ease the pain
    But everyday when I wake up
    I always feel quite the same
    In my mind, I have made up
    I am the only one to blame
    For this separation is killing me
    And in my head I feel deranged
    In my heart I feel such loss
    Even the deepest words won't explain
    So many talks that we have had
    Now it is all gone in vain
    But for what cause should we give up
    We've restrained ourselves with this love-chain
    Please, my love, don't lose hope
    Just believe and have some faith
    You be the only one I've loved this much
    Now tell me that you're game
    Because with you, I am in love
    You've made my life FAR from being plain
    I miss you loads and I hope you know,
    that all that crosses my mind is your name.



    Please, take the time to give me your feedback!
    Even if you think it's corny and don't like it! LET ME knowwwwww

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    amazingly written, i know the feeling!
    "You may win some, you may lose some, but you'll never be there again"

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    Not my type of poetry, but well done.

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    Thank you very much, -Manny2!
    I am very glad you know the feeling!

    And you too, MissyRobbins!

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