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Thread: it's the end (please critique this song i wrote!)

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    Quote Originally Posted by crystalmoonshin View Post
    Kitsunia... From the Japanese word kitsune meaning fox, right?

    Really, care to enlighten me why you are so obsessed with foxes?
    Probably because foxes are sagacious and clever creatures and maybe jekan feels empathy towards them, wants to learn their skills and wants to be like them
    It's more or less the same that I feel about wolves and dolphins

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maximilianus View Post
    Probably because foxes are sagacious and clever creatures and maybe jekan feels empathy towards them, wants to learn their skills and wants to be like them
    It's more or less the same that I feel about wolves and dolphins
    Quote Originally Posted by crystalmoonshin View Post
    Kitsunia... From the Japanese word kitsune meaning fox, right?

    Really, care to enlighten me why you are so obsessed with foxes?

    very close, maxi...

    and yes, the word "Kitsunia" is derived from the japanese word kitsune...

    to answer your question, it is because foxes are sly, manipulative, smart creative, and clever. all of these chracteristics decribe me, so i feel i have the personaltiy of a fox...

    HAX Energy Soda....

    you only WISH you were aweome enough to drink it.

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    What/who have you been cleverly manipulating, you naughty fox-man?
    I like foxes too, they live with a good attitude!

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    I must admit that I find Shippo a truly cute little fox.

    (It's the first time I've encountered someone who admits having the very qualities attributed to foxes, though. )
    Vanitas vanitatum, dixit Ecclesiastes, vanitas vanitatum, et omnia vanitas.

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    thanx peeps!

    HAX Energy Soda....

    you only WISH you were aweome enough to drink it.

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    Quote Originally Posted by jekan blazer View Post
    thanx peeps!
    Welcome!
    And good luck with the story!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Maximilianus View Post
    What/who have you been cleverly manipulating, you naughty fox-man?
    I like foxes too, they live with a good attitude!
    everyone?

    HAX Energy Soda....

    you only WISH you were aweome enough to drink it.

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