There is something wrong

[blazeofglory]

Friend, I have wronged you
In fact you and I own the earth
But I with muscled powers cartel all that the earth impregnates within her womb
I behave in a step-brotherly way
Even if you are a half-sharer and I being the other half-sharer
We fight, idolize something and hell-ing others
I have acres of land you have none
I am a bit clever lot and you are a slow thinker
I am good at math and therefore you owed more to us than you took from me
Friend there has been some miscalculation
You have to reinvent your self
You have to reframe laws
You have to reformulate your math
You have to resurrect your existence
There has been something wrong or system flaw
You need to rectify it
There is something wrong
My friend, I have wronged you

[lucidnightmares]

i like it
a reminder of all i learned in classes recently actually
in all honesty i can`t really put it into words, but i can try.
it`s a great expression of the ideas of the northern, empowered countries.
especially the lines telling the reader who (s)he has to change their self as if to accommodate for some peoples way of life.

o.k so iv`e ranted a little.

anyway`s great poem, my words can`t describe it so i had to relate it to myself.

[blazeofglory]

i like it
a reminder of all i learned in classes recently actually
in all honesty i can`t really put it into words, but i can try.
it`s a great expression of the ideas of the northern, empowered countries.
especially the lines telling the reader who (s)he has to change their self as if to accommodate for some peoples way of life.

o.k so iv`e ranted a little.

anyway`s great poem, my words can`t describe it so i had to relate it to myself.

Thank you for reading it. I am glad at the fact that you hit upon the spirit of the poem.

[Delta40]

a see-saw of imbalance. very nice

[blazeofglory]

a see-saw of imbalance. very nice

In fact this planet is home to all but sadly the few with their calloused muscle try to own everything not for thier need but for thier abysmal greed.