Love the detachment your poem evokes.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Love the detachment your poem evokes.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
seagulls
beach weather - anytime
seagulls glide blithely by foraging
for stranded surf bits
7/4/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Loved the image
The beach at night
Foam topped waves,
monstrously rolling to the shore
spilling their white milk.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Wish I was at beach Well done !
acrostic cat / lo-kus
cold in reflection
artful their impish paws
teasing brings joy
7/22/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 07-22-2022 at 11:35 PM. Reason: format
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed.
Without any metaphor
Enjoy cold sunny mornings
Happy animal´s noises
Friendly humans
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
quail / lo-kus
evening cooling
quail gather near a thicket
ready to race away
7/26/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
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tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Cute!
The Wombat
A real wombat
Needs no hat nor bath
Its womb is the earth
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
a serene morning
Birds sing, dog bark in the sunshine.
Nothing left for the last line.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
wombat: very existential
"a serene morning": lol !
pastoral day
sunrise summer morning
adorning this pastoral day
portrays blessed bluebell skies
8/3/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
crow / heptasyllabic verse
a cool start to a hot day
a crow in the distance calls
nary a whisper of wind
8/15/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Sorry, tailor, forgot to open this thread.
Enjoyed both vignettes.
A windy, stormy night
Humans screeching in the dark
A single bird announces dawn.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
the deep dark forest
in the deep dark forest
where giant sword ferns rise
færies weave their magic
8/16/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
Last edited by tailor STATELY; 08-16-2022 at 03:47 AM. Reason: format
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Charming!
The Locust
Yearning for forbidden plains
Streaming with his swarm
Leaving dried pastures behind.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Pick clean and move on
only the fortunate
only the fortunate
few have seen them -
færies fire the imagination
8/18/2022
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed!
Monday morning
Yawning stores,
Sleepy cars passing empty streets
Birds fulfilling their chores.
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row