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    Love the detachment your poem evokes.

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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    seagulls

    beach weather - anytime
    seagulls glide blithely by foraging
    for stranded surf bits

    7/4/2022

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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Loved the image

    The beach at night

    Foam topped waves,
    monstrously rolling to the shore
    spilling their white milk.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Wish I was at beach Well done !

    acrostic cat / lo-kus

    cold in reflection
    artful their impish paws
    teasing brings joy

    7/22/2022

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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    Enjoyed.

    Without any metaphor

    Enjoy cold sunny mornings
    Happy animal´s noises
    Friendly humans
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    quail / lo-kus

    evening cooling
    quail gather near a thicket
    ready to race away

    7/26/2022

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    Cute!

    The Wombat

    A real wombat
    Needs no hat nor bath
    Its womb is the earth
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    a serene morning
    Birds sing, dog bark in the sunshine.
    Nothing left for the last line.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    wombat: very existential

    "a serene morning": lol !

    pastoral day

    sunrise summer morning
    adorning this pastoral day
    portrays blessed bluebell skies

    8/3/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    crow / heptasyllabic verse

    a cool start to a hot day
    a crow in the distance calls
    nary a whisper of wind

    8/15/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Sorry, tailor, forgot to open this thread.
    Enjoyed both vignettes.


    A windy, stormy night
    Humans screeching in the dark
    A single bird announces dawn.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    the deep dark forest

    in the deep dark forest
    where giant sword ferns rise
    færies weave their magic

    8/16/2022

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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Charming!

    The Locust

    Yearning for forbidden plains

    Streaming with his swarm

    Leaving dried pastures behind.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Pick clean and move on

    only the fortunate

    only the fortunate
    few have seen them -
    færies fire the imagination

    8/18/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Enjoyed!


    Monday morning

    Yawning stores,
    Sleepy cars passing empty streets
    Birds fulfilling their chores.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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