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    Lo-kus

    I.e., not quite hai-kus!

    If I wish for you
    but do not know your name
    will you appear?
    *
    If I compose myself
    to wait for you forever,
    will you come
    five minutes before forever?
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    dawn gives a sense
    of things half remembered
    of newer things to come
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    dawn gives a sense
    of things half remembered
    of newer things to come
    Beautiful, dude - and all the more welcome in that it appears to herald your return to these hallowed halls!

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    If the poet cannot
    Become a child again, the verse
    Loses something in the translation...
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Pendragon View Post
    If the poet cannot
    Become a child again, the verse
    Loses something in the translation...
    Brilliant!

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    the locus

    the locus of our dreams
    a continuum of existence
    exalts our being

    6/15/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
    tailor
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Enjoyed the reflection!

    No rules!

    The fresh morning dew
    Graces the flowers with transparent tears
    wetting the bending grass.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    "No rules! "... lol !

    Enjoyed your Lok-us !!

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    on a red tiled roof,
    hoping for food and sunshine,
    Pigeons stand sentinel.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    I tried to identify our local scavenger and the best I came up with is Brewer's Blackbird... https://www.google.com/search?client...&bih=658&dpr=1

    anywho:

    blackbirds

    little generals strut
    looking for a crumb or two
    at every parking lot

    6/18/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
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    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    Cute little generals, specially that Euphagus with a round figure!

    Unusual Sunday

    An army of policemen
    at my door. Did World War III start?
    No, but the LGBT+ Parade!
    Last edited by Danik 2016; 06-19-2022 at 08:02 AM.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    lol ! Quite an eventful day. Incredible how many police are involved: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/São_Pa...y_Pride_Parade

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    They calculate about four million people in the parade of yesterday.

    The next morning

    the city yawns lazily
    and stretches itself to
    the ebb and tide of cars
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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    Wow !

    maya

    cool summer morning
    our dog barks at anything that moves
    and dandelions

    7/2/2022

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    tailor

    who am I but a stitch in time
    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

    7-8-2015

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    A conscientious dog!

    Saturday midday laziness

    Gym on the place
    People in the sun fumbling
    at their cell phone.
    #Stay home as much as you can and stay well

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