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    Passion

    Beads, yours or mine
    Who knows? Who cares?
    You're drippin, soaking wet
    As am I, as we are

    Taste of salt
    Taste of skin
    Scent of sin lures the room
    Yet to wed but you love my name

    Scream it louder
    Unsteady arms bare weight
    It's time to change
    To purchase a few more minutes

    10 more pass, every second's been counted
    The night's at its end
    Our bodies were on the same clock
    It's passion that let's it happen

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    wow, i really liked this one. Great job, good descriptive word play.

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    The imagery is nice! i liked it..

    "The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposed ideas in mind at the same time and still retain the ability to function. One should, for example, be able to see that things are hopeless and yet be determined to make them otherwise."

    -- F. Scott Fitzgerald

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