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    Falling Apart




    Falling Apart


    In a dark place
    In an empty place
    In a place which ain't my life
    In a place so quite
    That darkness that made me bilnd
    That emptiness that me alone
    That life which is just not mine

    Co'z am now so sick
    And falling apart
    Co'z now am sad
    And so can't smile

    Things go around
    All around me
    Things go about
    And am in the mid

    And now things change
    And I no longer make the world smile

    Sleeping with tears
    Waking with fears

    And at the end i realize
    That the world wants me to smile

    And at the end i realize
    That the world wants me to smile
    "He is asleep. Though his mettle was sorely tried,
    He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
    It happened calmly, on its own,
    The way the night comes when day is done."



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    Aww, that was sad, Hoope. I want you to smile, too.
    Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
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    Quote Originally Posted by kiz_paws View Post
    Aww, that was sad, Hoope. I want you to smile, too.

    i'll try though i dnt promise u ..coz life really sucks
    "He is asleep. Though his mettle was sorely tried,
    He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
    It happened calmly, on its own,
    The way the night comes when day is done."



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    Quote Originally Posted by hoope View Post



    Falling Apart


    In a dark place

    And now things change
    And I no longer make the world smile

    Sleeping with tears
    Waking with fears

    And at the end i realize
    That the world wants me to smile

    And at the end i realize
    That the world wants me to smile

    How touching are your words hoope

    you words are very amazing..

    but HOOPE...why tears, why sadness..color your life with hoope as your name


    Thanks so much for making me crying too
    Love is an un tamed force. When we try to control it, it desrtoys us. When we try to imprison it, it enslaves us. When we try to understand it, it leaves us feeling lost and confused

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    Something's Gone hoope's Avatar
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    ur visit mean alot to me..

    thx alot Romantic Novel for steppin by
    and sometimes we have no control over how our feelings go
    "He is asleep. Though his mettle was sorely tried,
    He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
    It happened calmly, on its own,
    The way the night comes when day is done."



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