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    Unrequited


    unrequited:
    it's all in the mind -
    an unkind game
    we play with our heart

    crushed by a crush
    or matrimony gone bust -
    it's the ache that breaks;
    a void that tears one apart

    10/10/2015


    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    what if I were to bare my soul
    would you see me origami

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    Last call, anybody else?
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    Apparently not.

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    Three good efforts there.

    But I can announce that the winner is ...

    taylor "Crushed by a crush" STATELY- excellent!
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    Thank you !

    I'm a fan of the funnies and read many daily @ http://www.gocomics.com/features . "Zen Pencils" http://www.gocomics.com/zen-pencils
    is a weekly (Mondays) that touches me quite often (not often a rib tickler). Today's theme is the subject that I would to to see explored:

    Happiness

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    Happiness

    We are connected like the leaves
    To something larger with strong roots
    And it’s connected, it believes,
    Which gives it hope to send out shoots.
    And that’s connected. So it goes.
    No need to question, ask what for.
    Happiness: a rush that flows
    And knows it need not ask for more.

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    What is Happiness Grandad?


    What is happiness Grandad?
    Asked the child.
    As she laid by the fire,
    On the rug,
    With the cat,
    Watching bright flames
    Dance out of black coal.

    I was half asleep,
    And didn't answer,
    But the cat purred on.
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    Happiness

    In appreciating,
    Seeing the beauty,
    Of the smallest thing -
    There lies my duty.

    A flicker of sunbeams
    Glows through the glass
    Onto your face, it gleams -
    This moment will never pass

    I hold onto it, not lonely
    In the cold and the rain
    With memories my only
    Reason, comfort for pain.

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    Hapiness With a P Thrown In

    Oh well you know
    such a thing
    is limited to the few
    Happiness is a puzzle
    We all know it's true
    It's about Mars
    Far more than Venus
    Any God will tell you
    Since they all Has Penis!
    Before sunlight can shine through a window, the blinds must be raised - American Proverb

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    Setting the deadline for end of day (PST), Tuesday, November 3. Thank you for the entries !

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    What Price Happiness?

    Money cannot buy happiness
    So it something to be treasured
    The things it can buy may give you cheer
    But happiness cannot be measured

    Good things in life are to be desired
    Good health, good food, good friends
    As far as happiness goes there are not required
    One forsaken and alone can still experience joy

    Are you truly happy? Then tell me, my friend
    The formula you use to ascertain it's value
    What would it take for your happiness to come to an end?
    That is the fulcrum you must guard and protect

    Don't base your happiness on something you own
    Something you like or someone you hold dear
    Because the lost that will come will bring happiness to an end
    Happiness is a state of mind, you nourish and grow!

    Pendragon
    10/29/2015
    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    boost

    happyness
    is a choice
    out of modern
    claws
    stress draws
    the mind needs
    it to unlawds
    light against
    flaws
    it becomes
    the meaning
    of cause
    with
    applause
    Last edited by cacian; 11-01-2015 at 07:30 AM.
    it may never try
    but when it does it sigh
    it is just that
    good
    it fly

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    A little more than 10-hours to go !... how 'bout some of you newbies ?

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    Happiness is a Warm Brain

    Serotonin, the Catecholamines
    Norepinephrine, dopamine, and adrenalin,
    GABA (gamma-aminobutyric acid),
    And Endorphins – These bring you happiness.

    We may talk of women, wine, and song, but
    These just bring on neurotransmitters.
    We may talk of the joy motherly love,
    But oxytocin brings that, not magic.

    Oh, happiness is just brain chemistry,
    Good food, chocolate, wine, and nuts with loving
    Caresses, sweet whispering, some nibbling
    All these stimulate neurotransmitter production

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    I enjoyed the variety of the interpretations explored regarding happiness. As usual I agonized over having to make a choice; all were worthy on one level or another.

    YesNo: My favorite lines -

    “We are connected like the leaves
    To something larger with strong roots”...
    “Happiness: a rush that flows
    And knows it need not ask for more.”

    prendrelemick: “What is happiness Grandad? Asked the child”...
    “the cat purred on.”

    Oh, if Grandad only imparted an effort to engage and break the spell of the ensuing tableau vivant !

    North Star: “In appreciating, Seeing the beauty, Of the smallest thing -
    There lies my duty.” I found this quite profound. The rest I found most melancholy for some reason; albeit affirming your opening lines.

    Delta40: My favorite line - “Happiness is a puzzle”.

    Your ending took me quite by surprise; a rather ribald repartee. Then I broke down your title to an understanding, a slow dawning I can assure you, and I better understood the Mars/Venus reference. Venus might have more to say in my estimation; from Shocking Blue: “Her weapon were her crystal eyes/Making every man mad.

    Pendragon: Upon deconstruction I discovered the gem within (IMHO):

    “happiness cannot be measured”... “One forsaken and alone can still experience joy”... “The formula you use to ascertain it's value”... “That is the fulcrum you must guard and protect”... “Happiness is a state of mind, you nourish and grow”.

    Cacian: “happyness
    is a choice”... (That is how I envisioned the ZenPencils 'comic'.)
    “out of modern
    claws”...
    “the mind needs”...
    “light”

    PeterL: “Happiness is a Warm Brain”

    (lol) I might have attributed the aforementioned to Timothy Leary or Ken Kesey; a very 60's mind set of the counter-cultured.

    Congratulations to all, and the winner is Pendragon !

    Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
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    7-8-2015

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