Autolycus, yes your poem is a clear winner here.
You had my vote from the time I read it but didn't want to influence the judgment.
And AuntShecky, I loved your three line verses, which gave the poem great melodic overtones, and separated its nature from the norm - which worked well with the light your poem shed on the humble guitar.
Great efforts by all.
I look forward to submitting an entry for "someone steps out from the shadows onto a cold winter street..." - A great, visual starting point.