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    The Midnight Saga - Chapter I - The Beginning of the Quest

    [prince]: I, the nocturnal prince, summon thee
    midnight warrior to tie the repugnant plague
    and ne'er come back and thou arn't triumphant
    else I send thee to thy sepulchre with grant

    [warrior]: thou art my sovereign lord and prince,
    with no woe i redeem my soul to thee and hence
    neither shalt fear nor pain within my depth
    prevail, life is precious and so is death...

    [prince]: as the dawn hits the horizon afar, thou shalt
    hurl across the oceans and the mountains of malt
    the crown of triumph thou will bring
    shalt be thy saviour and my precious wing

    [warrior]: with my sword and entity i vow
    returning back victorious! Ho

    and the warrior stroke his hand and took his vow
    shalt he return back or shalt he?! O' no
    through the lonesome mountains he marchs with no fear
    tearing the ground by the strikes of his feet
    he was clad in green and silver holding his staff
    an axe was held to his waist, a sword about his back
    his golden helmet shimmered and glimmered,
    as the shafts of the sun flared upon it
    seven leages are now behind afar from the kingdom
    the warrior stopped and looked back
    waver he is, girt in confusion and tranquillity
    yearning for his warm bed and crimson wine
    his beast neighed, as if he's alarming him to move on
    he patted on his horse's neck and sighed
    the wind blew swiftly and the sun's beams arose
    he felt sick, yet he was keen and sturdy
    still staring back at the ancinet burg in silence,
    trying to absorb as much power as he could
    from the air around, breathing holding it in
    for it shall bestow him power in his long journey
    he grasped his sword-hilt, streched forth his sword
    out of it's sheath and held it high his proud head
    merrily spoke words of his tongue in clamor
    his eyes glistened as he sang long

    "I long to thee, I miss thee now
    I miss thee thither and I bow!
    With courage and valor I vow
    to cleave mine way ahead
    through the mounts of the dead
    and the coombs, across the mud
    no fear shall overtake the soul
    nor foul nights and things that crawl
    I, vow, to not retreat or fall!
    Revel my king's bid with my sword,
    axe, beast, dagger and cord
    no fear, I shall say, my Lord!
    I summon thine power ye above
    creators of the hate and the love
    to cleanse me and set me off
    to the path ahead, for it's cark,
    weary, mysterious and dark
    cleanse my peril and leave no mark!
    I will march across the sheer montains
    of narrow brinks and hoary summits
    hewn the peril of the beasts
    I will be the throb of the earth's heart,
    spill my blood and shall call it art!
    A black bough that was once burnt
    will be put again on the flames of hate
    ignite myself for it's my fate,
    and burst 'ere the peril, 'ere it's too late"

    in no time, the warrior ran his beast like a wind
    he fleet with the air down in the stoney basins afar
    a beginning of a journy unknown to his soul
    sage and keen, he is, that shan't stop ever.

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    Marvelous, a work or a solemn warrior.

    and the warrior stroke his hand and took his vow
    shalt he return back or shalt he?! O' no
    Did you mean Shan`t he?

    I`m glad I see you here Assaad.
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    My goodness, you are writing your way through an epic! I kneel to thee! And I love your traditional summons to the higher power:

    Quote Originally Posted by assaado View Post
    I summon thine power ye above
    creators of the hate and the love
    to cleanse me and set me off
    to the path ahead, for it's cark,
    weary, mysterious and dark
    cleanse my peril and leave no mark!
    I am very much looking forward to reading the rest!

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    Fafo I meant "Shall", thanks alot hun =)

    Cathy, thanks for your comment I surely will be posting the rest of it soon

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