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    Sickness

    I hate love stories
    I have always hated love stories
    I even hated them when I was in love

    Jesus it's like they all want you to feel inadequate...
    like you are a ****ing loser
    for not finding that person

    Yeah? well, it's not like I don't want
    to find that person
    I just cant

    I feel blind
    lost
    in a sea that threatens to swallow me

    I need someone to ground me
    someone to tether me

    that is my one weakness
    I need a man
    to be happy

    no matter how much time
    I spend alone
    I will always know

    that I need someone
    to come home to
    ***(Tattooed)(Wonder)***

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    This was so full of strong emotion, and bitterness and anger. I do agree with your sentiment upon Love stories, never been much of a fan myself there.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe

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    The ironic turn in those last five lines makes this especially poignant.

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    Couldn't agree with you more!

    goldenrod.

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