Importance Being of Greater Significance: Useless Things
Promises never kept,
Smiles sunken low,
Talking out loud
Against what should not have lurked and prowled.
What should not exist
Should disappear amongst lost thoughts.
Memories once important
Should cease to persist,
After living their welcome stay.
Worth only few things,
Of any least importance.
(Importance being of greater significance)
In the light of golden happiness
Is what each one seeks.
To vanish forever
would be to find a place
above the clouds and mystery,
For those below the sanguine sun,
That rides a cloud so elegantly.
Hurricane thoughts sweep importance,
Blasting imperfection clear;
Willing an unbroken tear
To fall with so many more,
In the rains of eternal hope.
Promises now kept,
Smiles risen high,
Talking out loud
For what should be seen proud.
Hey people, I'm new to this, but if possible I would like some feedback on my poetry, because I don't think i'm very good at writing them. This is just one, and each one I write, in my personal opinion, seems to get worse.