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    Manny2
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    Completely Lost...

    completely lost
    with only hurtful thoughts ahead,
    a broken heart,
    and a pounding head.

    a process many people undertake,
    by losing a best friend,
    a boyfriend,
    even worse,
    someone you confided in.

    you took my heart,
    the happiness you brought me,
    love that was shown to me.

    now there is nothing left to take
    all left is fake.

    please give me a smile,
    one last one for me to take.
    "You may win some, you may lose some, but you'll never be there again"

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    Quote Originally Posted by manny2 View Post
    completely lost
    with only hurtful thoughts ahead,
    a broken heart,
    and a pounding head.

    a process many people undertake,
    by losing a best friend,
    a boyfriend,
    even worse,
    someone you confided in.

    you took my heart,
    the happiness you brought me,
    love that was shown to me.

    now there is nothing left to take
    all left is fake.

    please give me a smile,
    one last one for me to take.
    Oh Manny, this is so heartfelt! Of course it FEELS to you as if you're lost without that other who was your map... your MAP but never actually your reality, but...

    But you found the words to say this and you found your way to your keyboard so, you're not completely lost. You have yourself... and to the extent that we can be 'real' for you, you have us!
    "You must be the change you want to see in the world." Gandhi

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