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    A Werewolf In Full Moon

    A Werewolf In Full Moon


    The moon came from its hideout,
    And I howled!
    The stars didn't light the skyway,
    And I howled!
    I saw your face in outer space,
    And I howled!
    You glared at me through the moonlight,
    And I howled!
    The rain broke the silent night,
    And I howled!
    I smiled...and you scowled,
    And I howled!
    You ran away with fright,
    And I howled...
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    What do you think about this one, guys?
    Leaping and hopping like a frog now, but still have a long way to go before I get crowned as "King Frog"!

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    Repetition can prove to be a powerful tool in poetry, yet this was a bit over used. Also, you struggled a little too much to make rhyme. I can see the emotion you are trying to convey, but its on the other side of the room. Try move to bridge that gap with an informal, open poem.
    To say that literature is dying is to say that the world is dying.

    " 'The most important part of poetry is structure!' one student answers. ' No! The most important part of poetry is sound.' Another retorts. 'No! The most important part of poetry is rhyme!' says the last. 'No!" Says the teacher, ' The most important part of poetry is the meaning, no structure, nor sound nor rhyme alone can define poetry, combine them all and you get meaning.'

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    I think it is a howler!

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