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    Serious business Taliesin's Avatar
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    Hand in hand

    Yesterday
    I
    walked through between two people
    so they had to let go
    of each other's hands.
    When I had passed,
    they smiled
    and walked on,
    hand in hand again.
    I
    walked on too.
    Alone.
    If you believe even a half of this post, you are severely mistaken.

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    Good morning, Campers! Jay's Avatar
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    Nice . Like it.
    I have a plan: attack!

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    Short and sweet; well done, Taliesin.

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    in a blue moon amuse's Avatar
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    mm. so picturesque. beautiful yet miserable.
    like the zap of
    I
    walked on too.
    Alone.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    You captured just how all adolescents feel. Reminds me of Green Day's "Boulevard of Broken Dreams". Good work!
    Jo S.

    "Perception is reality"

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