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    sorry I messed contempt up but it's fixed.
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    OH, d'oh, sorry, I guessed it was a typo but couldn't make out what was it supposed to mean, I can be really dull at times

    Forever shall it stay so,
    Fellings
    and falls unto dreams,
    shattered dreams undo my
    ship battered by you and
    Tears you may let rain
    All currents go toward estuary
    but never will they die
    of sorrow, darkness strikes you
    without intention of
    regret for your tortures unendured
    and gave in the pleasure of immortality
    Showing death embedded into life,
    Nightmare unfolds my pathway
    of thorns and crosses upon it misery of unforgiven
    words impose on faithless beings
    songs shatter equilibrium,
    unknowingly causing chaos throughout my
    mind attempting suicide
    oh why enchanted bonds shatter
    thy soul with broken arrows
    protruding torment escapes ashes
    even within fearless thoughts.
    This reality becomes a dream
    disturbing sanity
    causing raptures throughout one's history,
    future unsure,
    what lives beneath the surface
    what crawls mindlessly
    never doubt your heart
    always become two histories of one present,
    one future divided in war,
    fallen glory, grace lost in ashes of contempt and
    I have a plan: attack!

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    Forever shall it stay so,
    Fellings
    and falls unto dreams,
    shattered dreams undo my
    ship battered by you and
    Tears you may let rain
    All currents go toward estuary
    but never will they die
    of sorrow, darkness strikes you
    without intention of
    regret for your tortures unendured
    and gave in the pleasure of immortality
    Showing death embedded into life,
    Nightmare unfolds my pathway
    of thorns and crosses upon it misery of unforgiven
    words impose on faithless beings
    songs shatter equilibrium,
    unknowingly causing chaos throughout my
    mind attempting suicide
    oh why enchanted bonds shatter
    thy soul with broken arrows
    protruding torment escapes ashes
    even within fearless thoughts.
    This reality becomes a dream
    disturbing sanity
    causing raptures throughout one's history,
    future unsure,
    what lives beneath the surface
    what crawls mindlessly
    never doubt your heart
    always become two histories of one present,
    one future divided in war,
    fallen glory, grace lost in ashes of contempt and hatred.
    currently in my world of insanity and randomism

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    ahem *coughs* new stanza? It seems finished... as in the 'idea' of it... might... ok, shutting up:
    What do you think?
    I have a plan: attack!

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    I think it's done.
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    It seems finished.
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    lol, Sub always kicks my a** for doing that, so stanza 3 Bong? Seeing as not too many other members played along
    I have a plan: attack!

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    Why not,Jay?
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    Stanza 3

    I shall start it!


    Umbrella



    I'm back!

    ok forget this post.. i started a new thread.
    Last edited by kushi; 04-08-2005 at 12:53 AM.
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