Not exactly poetry

[Stanislaw]

This isn't exactly a poem, but it came from my heart. Think of it as prose, I couldn't think of where else to post it, oh and sorry if the grammer is off, I am farely new to german.

Alle hageln die Goldkuh, die wir gebildet haben. Lieben Sie es, beten Sie es an, hassen Sie es. Hassen Sie uns alle. Töten Sie uns alle. Brennen Sie uns lebendig. Essen Sie unser Fleisch untill, das Sie verrotten. Erdrosseln Sie auf unserem Fleisch. Hassen Sie uns untill, das Sie lieben. Lieben Sie den Ton der verrottenden Körper. Schmelzen in die Glasnacht. Alle hageln das alte Arschloch, lieben ihn, anbeten ihn, schrauben ihn. Bilden Sie ihn Ihr. Sie heilige Männer, Sie kluge Männer, Sie tote jüdische Männer. Lieben Sie ihn und er stirbt.

Opinions, and no, it isn't a Rammstein song.

[mono]

You write in German very well, Stan. I feel I cannot emphasize with whatever feelings you had while writing this piece, but I can honestly say that you have a very unique style of expressing yourself. Well done, overall.

[Stanislaw]

Thank you, I was feeling a little angry at the time, and I had a bad morning. thanks again.

[baddad]

Uhh.....ummmm......I don't speak German at all....but the little angry not-smiley-faces give a hint of the emotions involved......hope you feel better my friend.

[Stanislaw]

Thanks, I wrote it in german because I felt it helped get my emotion across.

[subterranean]

for heaven's sake Stan, how am i suppose to understand and give my little silly comments...
and what's with all those ..?

[Stanislaw]

visual aid? lol
I'll post a translation of it for you guys, but it doesn't work well in english.

[subterranean]

well give it a shot!