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    Words

    Words
    Words unspoken,
    Words unknown.
    Words that are kept secret from the world.
    A true story that indeed.
    A story that is said to be a lie.
    A heart broken face which tears run down.
    A broken heart that screams.
    Family and friends now worry,
    And as they love her and try to comfort her
    All this girl can do is try to find herself within.
    Last edited by Red_Rose; 04-05-2008 at 07:48 PM.

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    Oh, cool very nice. I like it very much. Very moving as usual and yet unique. I like every line. Keep up the work. Thanks for sharing!

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Red_Rose View Post
    Words
    Words unspoken,
    Words unknown.
    Words that are kept secret from the world.
    A true story that indeed.
    A story that is said to be a lie.
    A heart broken face which tears run down.
    A broken heart that screams.
    Family and friends now worry,
    And as they love her and try to comfort her
    All this girl can do is try to find herself within.
    Your words are rosy, blosooming and indeed they move all.

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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    Registered User Red_Rose's Avatar
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    Thank you ShadowFire and blazeofglory for the comments. I love that people are actually liking my poetry.

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