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    Haiku

    Punishable one,
    For he lost all in his life,
    His soul became void.
    currently in my world of insanity and randomism

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    Like it, confuses me a lot when I try to think about it. Is he 'punishable one' for losing his life or for his soul being void... or it's both as losing his life made his soul void...
    And why 'punishable' at all?
    I have a plan: attack!

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    for both and to become void many deaths by him and to him were made
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    emotion is dead

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    And on the sidewalk,
    Was the feathery raven,
    Crushed into the grooves.

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    Cool Ninja.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bongitybongbong View Post
    Punishable one,
    For he lost all in his life,
    His soul became void.
    eeeerrrr??? at first I thaught his punishment was that he lost all in his life, but on second reading I wonder mmmmhhhh. It's confusing but intriguing.
    Out, out, brief candle!

    Life's but a walking shadow; a poor player,

    That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,

    And then is heard no more:


    William Shakespeare

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    A rose blossomed
    It is not the road that blossomed
    The mind blossomed
    The road and the mind blossomed together
    They are one, indivisibly one.

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

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    he's punishable, i believe, because he has let everything be lost in his life. thus, his soul becomes void from both the loss and the punishment?

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