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    Cheyenne

    You are my friend,
    I may not know you,
    I may not see you,
    Or hear you

    But you are my friend

    We only talk,
    On the computer,
    But we talk,
    You are my friend.

    My friend,
    I understand,
    What you want to do,
    And partly why.

    I know,
    Your deepest secret,
    And I feel,
    Horrible,
    For what you've went through
    You are my friend

    And I,
    Beg of you,
    Please don't,
    Don;t do it to yourself.

    I may not know you,
    But I know you

    I know,
    You are my friend,
    That's all
    I have to know,
    To say this.

    You know what I mean,
    Please don't leave,
    Please be strong..

    Please,
    Be my friend
    roller-coaster of emotions

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    Scared

    I'm scared she'll leave,
    I'm scared she'll die,
    I'm scared i'll cry,
    I'm scared.

    Tell her no,
    Show her you care,
    Show yourself you care,
    Be a friend.

    If you dont care,
    Then just leave,
    Because you cant help,
    I'm scared.

    Stand up,
    For yourself,
    And friends,
    Be strong,
    Be nice,
    Be here,
    Be there,
    Be a friend.

    Stay here,
    Dont even think,
    What I know you are,
    Because your my friend,
    And I'm scared.
    roller-coaster of emotions

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    please tell me what you think, i wrote these and gave them to my friend, i'm trying to keep her from killing herself and she loved them.
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    Alone

    Four friends stand,
    In a little group

    Three friends talk,
    In that little group

    One person stands,
    Staring into space,
    In the little group
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    Changing

    Music is powerful,
    My days are full
    Boredom is less,
    I feel blessed

    Things are changing,
    I am hanging
    Hanging in the air,
    Of uncertainty
    And confusion

    Things are changing,
    Soon I'll be a year older,
    And a grade higher

    People are coming,
    People are going

    I am learning,
    And slowly understanding
    What it takes,
    To be here,
    To be strong,
    To be there,
    To live long

    Things are changing,
    I am learning

    I will be there,
    And here
    I will be strong,
    and live long

    But I'll be the same
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    welcome to the forum~ i love your poems please i beg you to write more and we can improve together xD

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    Quote Originally Posted by forcedtobe View Post
    ...i wrote these and gave them to my friend, i'm trying to keep her from killing herself...
    Thats a very nice thing to do, forcedtobe. I wish all the best in your efforts.

    And these are simple and nice, though i thought they could do better with some more depth and difference. But often when i write anything to my friends i dont care about the qualitative value of what i'm saying so...
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    ...the smell of flowers through metal labyrinths.

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    Quote Originally Posted by symphony View Post
    Thats a very nice thing to do, forcedtobe. I wish all the best in your efforts.

    And these are simple and nice, though i thought they could do better with some more depth and difference. But often when i write anything to my friends i dont care about the qualitative value of what i'm saying so...
    i agree. but of course, there's no beating noble intention. wishing you and your friend the best..
    ...don't need therapy to rehabilitate my smile...


    http://profiles.friendster.com/6239700

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    "welcome to the forum~ i love your poems please i beg you to write more and we can improve together xD"

    thanks
    i will, i just dont know how to get better other then practice and reading other poems, which i am trying to do.
    i'm glad you like them, i am trying to get better and i think i am getting better about what topic i chose and how i decide to talk about it and stuff, but i still am not quite happy with them..
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    symphony and amanda_isabel

    thanks --she's doing alot better, she said she didnt know i cared that much and that she was really going to try to stay here for me i'm soo excited for that

    i knew something was wrong/missing with my poems but i didnt know what. i like writing poems and i'm going to continue, so thanks for the little bit of advice i'll try to get them deeper in feelings
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    is this better? i'm afraid i'll go too deep or something and it'll look bad, if thats even possible on the too deep part..but here it is..hope you like it

    Amazing

    I'm beggining
    To love this word
    When I read it,
    My heart flutters
    I feel
    For that slight moment,
    Cared for
    And my thoughts,
    Are less cluttered

    I'm really liking this guy...
    He seems to understand
    And care,
    He seems so sweet,
    Kind and smart

    And what he says to me..
    I read it and,
    My heart smiles,
    Even for that slight moment,
    I read what he says,
    And I melt

    When you step outside,
    And the bright sun hits you
    For that slight moment,
    You seem to feel that warmth
    On the inside, you feel it
    For that moment,
    Then its gone

    When I read those few words
    From him...
    Its like the sun
    Hitting me, but
    Longer then just a moment
    Or two

    And when he says it hurts him,
    To know how I feel inside,
    I just want him to stop hurting
    For me, I want him to be happy

    I want to discover who I am,
    Maybe I will with his care,
    In his words...
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    wow ,Its gr8

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    thanks mahishi
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    wow a leap improvement! i liked it

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    thanks Reynard..i'm trying to get deeper, glad its better
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