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    Peace is this way Jester's Avatar
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    Story place

    There’s a hum in the background
    The heater is on and the computer next to mine.
    Pages are being rifled far away
    Head are bent over books and pages of frosted white and antique yellow
    Oh my,
    I’m lost in the library
    In the roamings and comfortings of thousands of dreams
    Of thousand of dreams
    Of thousands of dreams
    Of thousands of adventures, pain and anguish
    Of love and romance, and desire and destitute
    Among facts and theories
    And books that have not been touched since 1968
    I’m lost in the library
    I don’t want to be found




    (A note, I wrote this right now, first draft read over it once then posted. I'm in the library and working there not actually among the books though that would be nice. tell me what you think and if anyone else ever feels this way.)
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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    Good morning, Campers! Jay's Avatar
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    Like the lines:
    I'm lost in the library
    I don't want to be found

    it's the last line that got me all day-dreaming, do NOT do that when I'm supposed to be studying... in the library . Like it. Oh and the hum in this library's background is just... NOISE, lol. People walking, CHATTING, computers ventilators, monitors, floppy drives ratling, the two girls next to me hittin the keys of the keyboards so hard I feel sorry for the keyboards, lol. This library is anything BUT quiet.
    I have a plan: attack!

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    Peace is this way Jester's Avatar
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    quiet is a reletive term, i find that when something is supposedly quiet it makes the most noice of all.... i like those alst lines too, thanks
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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