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    I Miss The Place

    I MISS THE PLACE

    I miss the place
    Where I journeyed into this world
    Where a loving mother
    Kissed me And gently brushed my curls

    I miss the place
    Where mother taught me the joys of life
    And my father
    Taught me to seek harmony from strife

    I miss the place
    Where my school days first began
    And those friends
    That made up our inseparable band

    I miss the place
    Where my heart had an optimistic view
    And I miss the face
    Of my one and only love so true

    I miss the place
    Where summer days seemed without end
    Where natures bounty
    Spilled from the fields we had to tend

    I miss the place
    Where the bones of my parents lay
    And the times
    When our days were full with play

    I miss the place
    I knew before I grew into a man
    And took up arms
    To fight for the king in a foreign land

    I miss the place
    That is the home I shall never see again
    Never smell the grasses green
    Or taste those gentle summer rains

    I miss that place
    My distant home far across the sea
    The place I left behind
    So I could die fighting for the free

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    WoW...it is attractive Poem.. Thank you...

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    I like this poem a lot. I like the repetition used for each stanza. You can feel the longing for the old and it is simple to relate to this poem. I enjoyed reading it and thank you very much for sharing.

    No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.

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