Innocence lost
Relationship fragile
Happiness shallow
Love useless
Divinity nowhere
Touches ugly
Kisses bitter
Time wasted
Wedding takes place
Innocence lost
Relationship fragile
Happiness shallow
Love useless
Divinity nowhere
Touches ugly
Kisses bitter
Time wasted
Wedding takes place
I like this style of poetry. I made one similar to it. My favorite part is the line "Relationship fragile". Man, do I know that is true, so delicate. I also like how the poem is simple and to the point. You waste no time (excuse the pun from the poem) in getting out you point. Good job.
No matter what lies beyond the horizon, you can always find a guiding light.
I loved that Aashy! It shows how one is being forced to marry to the one whom he/she doesn't prefer from the heart.Originally Posted by aashishameya
Last four lines moved me Aashy!
Aashishameya, I completely echo the words of Dibyendra. The poem was short and very to the point. I enjoyed it.
Our task must be to free ourselves by widening our circle of compassion to embrace all living creatures and the whole of nature and its beauty
~Albert Einstein
wow...nicely done.
"Life is a long lesson in humility." - James M. Barrie
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