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    Crossing

    Khe Iem

    CROSSING

    bite off a piece of sorrow to make snakes and dragons

    flirt

    to coax
    each other across

    the splendid river distinguished by the afternoon’s southeasterly winds

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    so short, so much to read.
    the first line seems to be how we create anger, and aggression from our own sorrow.
    it`s wonderful to read, and i get a beautiful scene in my head when i do read it.
    the last line is my favorite, that`s where the image is strongest in my mind.
    it`s like a wonderful dream.

    what i used to be will pass away and then you`ll see that all i want to know is happiness for you and me...

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    Thank you so much for reading. Khe Iem

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