You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
(is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
Yeah, I'm giving the 'wink' and the 'gun' like Ponch from Chips, big whoop wanna fight about it?
Maybe those who are adding the last word, or who just has, can do the punctuation depending on their take?
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"It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
~
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song
(i have no clue anyone want to volunteer to punctuate this poem?)
Last edited by Jester; 11-04-2004 at 06:36 PM. Reason: finger didn't sound right :P
"It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
-The Fairy Godmother
"Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
- Uncle Tom's Cabin
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song swiftly
Out of the tree of life I just picked me a plum.
- Frank Sinatra
my lj - www.livejournal.com/~zephora
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
wafting -
*oops! same time oh no*
Last edited by amuse; 11-04-2004 at 06:43 PM.
shh!!!
the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely
(there incorporate teh two)
Last edited by Jester; 11-04-2004 at 06:45 PM.
"It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
-The Fairy Godmother
"Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
- Uncle Tom's Cabin
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling
Out of the tree of life I just picked me a plum.
- Frank Sinatra
my lj - www.livejournal.com/~zephora
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
"It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
-The Fairy Godmother
"Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
- Uncle Tom's Cabin
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the
~
"It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
~
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss
Adger Ellen Poe
"Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
~
"It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
~
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatros
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted
Adger Ellen Poe
"Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond
†
pura vida, the life of the Ninja!
seeker
JOIN THE NINJA CLAN AND FIGHT THE PIRATES!
You unfold its darkness gently
so that my mind will silently
mellow in its unknown fancy
song -
swiftly, wafting -
strangely falling towards
the abyss.
The
Albatross drifted beyond the
Adger Ellen Poe
"Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."