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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy

    (is punctuation done on consensus, or is someone going to step up and grammarize this sucker?)
    Yeah, I'm giving the 'wink' and the 'gun' like Ponch from Chips, big whoop wanna fight about it?

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    Maybe those who are adding the last word, or who just has, can do the punctuation depending on their take?
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    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song

    (i have no clue anyone want to volunteer to punctuate this poem?)
    Last edited by Jester; 11-04-2004 at 06:36 PM. Reason: finger didn't sound right :P
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song swiftly
    Out of the tree of life I just picked me a plum.
    - Frank Sinatra
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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    wafting -

    *oops! same time oh no*
    Last edited by amuse; 11-04-2004 at 06:43 PM.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely

    (there incorporate teh two)
    Last edited by Jester; 11-04-2004 at 06:45 PM.
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling
    Out of the tree of life I just picked me a plum.
    - Frank Sinatra
    my lj - www.livejournal.com/~zephora

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    "It all comes down to what we make of ourselves, eh?"
    -The Fairy Godmother

    "Sing on, poor souls! The night is short, and the morning will part you forever!"
    - Uncle Tom's Cabin

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the
    ~
    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the abyss
    Adger Ellen Poe

    "Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the abyss.
    The
    ~
    "It is not that I am mad; it is only that my head is different from yours.”
    ~


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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the abyss.
    The
    Albatros

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the abyss.
    The
    Albatross drifted
    Adger Ellen Poe

    "Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
    swiftly, wafting -
    strangely falling towards
    the abyss.
    The
    Albatross drifted beyond

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    You unfold its darkness gently
    so that my mind will silently
    mellow in its unknown fancy
    song -
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    strangely falling towards
    the abyss.
    The
    Albatross drifted beyond the
    Adger Ellen Poe

    "Te audire no possum. Musa sapientum fixa est in aure."

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