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    The Plant Creature

    A totally random, almost bizaar buch of ideas!

    Through deep dark bushes
    Of misconceptions
    And misinterpretations
    He watches them silently.
    Puzzling.

    Leaves of fear block his view;
    Black, cold and brittle.
    Stems of insecurity and uncertainty
    Claw around his shoulders and arms,
    Paralyzing him,
    Gripping with woody determination.

    Roots from the past
    Delve deeply into a disturbing childhood;
    Grounding him in one spot.
    Drawing up minerals from bitter memories,
    The creature grows,
    Overpowering him.

    He cannot move.
    He longs so fervently for their company,
    But he cannot reach them.
    Unable to uproot his legs
    He cannot follow them.
    So he sits quietly,
    And watches them quizzically through leafy glasses,
    All the time morphing into the numb plant,
    That is his existence.

    For: “Life is what despairs in death
    And, desperate, is life still.”
    - Archibald Mac Leish.
    Blessed are the cracked, for it is they who let in the light.......

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    i like what you did with this poem, great imagery and orignality. excellent

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