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    How bout....

    today comes too soon
    love seems to have its effect
    lovers who must part

    today comes too soon
    mists of memory lingers
    mind's dark recesses
    Last edited by Janine; 05-27-2009 at 11:36 PM.
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    Quote Originally Posted by mazHur View Post
    Janine, you do read me well! Are you a 'phrenologist'?
    hahaha..I am not sure I am that cerebral....what exactly is a phrenologist anyway...is that someone who studies brains or head shapes...duh?
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    LoL
    And nice finishes, Janine.

    Tiger lilies sway
    "... turn off the sun pull the stars from the sky
    the more I give to you the more I die ..."
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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post
    hahaha..I am not sure I am that cerebral....what exactly is a phrenologist anyway...is that someone who studies brains or head shapes...duh?
    For knowing more about phrenology, and for vocal convenience, you will have to bring your ear close to my mouth!
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    Tiger lilies sway
    Dappling more tender blossoms
    "It is not the rich man you should properly call happy, but him who knows with wisdom how to use the blessings of the gods, to endure hard poverty, and who fears dishonor worse than death, and is not afraid to die for cherished friends or fatherland."

    - Horace

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    Quote Originally Posted by mazHur View Post
    For knowing more about phrenology, and for vocal convenience, you will have to bring your ear close to my mouth!
    ou la la.........


    Tiger lilies sway
    Dappling more tender blossoms
    In fragrant twilight

    LoL
    And nice finishes, Janine
    Kiz, thanks and I love your first line above! Glad you are back in Haiku's. I see you were up late last night.
    Last edited by Janine; 05-28-2009 at 02:56 PM.
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    In fragrant twilight
    moth whispered into the ear
    of the flower-love!
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    Quote Originally Posted by mazHur View Post
    In fragrant twilight
    moth whispered into the ear
    of the flower-love!

    mazHur
    , I am wild about your new Haiku; but I hate to inform you - we are in 3
    Person Haiku - oops that brain of yours got mixed up again with your heart.

    Just use your last line as the new one......
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post

    mazHur
    , I am wild about your new Haiku; but I hate to inform you - we are in 3
    Person Haiku - oops that brain of yours got mixed up again with your heart.

    Just use your last line as the new one......
    I am sooo sorry, Janine and all here...for the brief 'fits' of romance that i am having!! Please forgive me for that !!
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    Quote Originally Posted by mazHur View Post
    I am sooo sorry, Janine and all here...for the brief 'fits' of romance that i am having!! Please forgive me for that !!
    It's ok, mazhur....hey, dream on.....it's cyberspace. I will take the liberty to post that last line of yours since it's quite lovely.....

    Line by mazHur

    of the flower-love

    Mine added

    of the flower-love
    D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
    Last edited by Janine; 05-28-2009 at 03:42 PM.
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post
    It's ok, mazhur....hey, dream on.....it's cyberspace. I will take the liberty to post that last line of yours since it's quite lovely.....

    of the flower-love
    D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
    blossoms free, natural

    lovely haiku...I have taken the liberty to use your extemporaneous 3rd line as can't think of a better one!



    'dream on as you will'
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    Quote Originally Posted by mazHur View Post
    blossoms free, natural

    lovely haiku...I have taken the liberty to use your extemporaneous 3rd line as can't think of a better one!



    'dream on as you will'
    Hahah...now we really did it! Just use that line as my last one. I forgot too and started to finish the haiku but then edited it. I must have been too slow...
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    Quote Originally Posted by Janine View Post
    Hahah...now we really did it! Just use that line as my last one. I forgot too and started to finish the haiku but then edited it. I must have been too slow...
    haha! What are we upto? Romanticizing, you too?
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    Always romanticizing.....DHL fan! hhaha.....so here is the complete poem.....

    of the flower-love
    D.H.Lawrence embraced thoughts
    blossoms free, natural
    Last edited by Janine; 05-28-2009 at 04:01 PM.
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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    spring buds cause sneezing
    "It's so mysterious, the land of tears."

    Chapter 7, The Little Prince ~ Antoine de Saint-Exupéry

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