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    Hello everyone!May I call you friend ?Welcome to say something about my poems.I have a passionate with literature especially poem.Therefore I work, and I get lots of poems .They are my children , and I hold strong love from bottom of my heart.And I would like to show you my poem to share the thought of Chinese who inherited both ancient Chinese and Wesetern culture.I apologlize for my poor English and my understanding of western culture.I must have made some stupid mistakes in both of them.While please forgive me . I'll improve myself and make myself do better.Thank you again for reading. If you like them , means you like me. I'll feel grateful and all my heart and soul will not doing in vain.

    1 For Zhang Yanxin
    (A Girl Who Give the Inspirtion to Me)--Love Poems



    My Love to Thee Is the Sun

    My Love to thee Is the Sun
    Hanging high in the summer noon
    To whose perfect idol I’ll devote has only one
    My sense gets lost in our shining moon

    My love to thee is the moon
    Of a passion need not return
    Peaceful moonlight could drive my blood run
    For deep of my heart lies an invisible sun

    One sun is enough to give the warm and light
    One love is enough to keep all harm and fight
    Even cruel autumn gets all flowers fade and die
    Your survival will make me not sigh and cry

    One moon is enough to touch the gentle breeze
    Even fall in arctic will not my heart freeze
    One love is enough to lock the pain still hurting
    One love is enough to release the happiness everlasting

    For both of the sun and moon has only one
    Also my love should be a one-way line
    Extra romances must I shun
    For my true love has only one

    Without seeing you twice
    Already had my heart come to realize
    Long time searching for love had done
    My true love here has only one

    Once your light comes in
    My window gets shut
    Study your face is my best pleasure so keen
    Your smile has my endless sorrow cut

    In both worlds I treasure you so much
    Whose heart still I dare not to touch
    My love to thee growing from the first glance
    Within a while are the sees blossom, tossing and dance

    To thou everything I have is willing to sacrifice
    To thee anything I have not will come to search at one
    To thee without any hesitation I’ll give the golden apple
    No matter how terrible I’ll suffer from the poisonous arrow

    Since here I said so many brave words
    Before thou my heart filled with flying birds
    Endless words still I want to say
    Pure and bright your eyes, forever my bay

    One rose occupies one heart
    One love generates one nut


    My Happiness
    I eager to get my happiness, and I will always try my best to get it.
    Then what is my happiness?
    Er, let me see…
    I feel so happy when your smile, the most beautiful music played in my heart. I feel so luck that I can enjoy it .Though not always can I get the chance, but only a few time can made me full.
    My world is bright and gleaming, sunshine is touching my heart.
    I feel so happy when I stare at you from distance, watching your face and study your mood. From your big , bright eyes, I learned what is purity, as pure as the sky after the storm , as pure as the snow lay in quiet . And from your expression, which has so many slightly difference, I can read the shape of your world. But corner of your mind, I never dare to touch.
    I feel so happy that healthy likes you so much and care you a lot. She takes you as her best friend, and values your friendship very much. While she is a bit of narrow-minded, when disease and other strangers knock your door, she keeps them out and shut the door so tightly. She is guarding you and also, I suppose, she is happy to do so.
    I feel so happy that in deep of the dark night, I could stay alone in quiet, a beautiful wish born, gather my praying, could rise into sky, become the most significant star guarding your dream. Also I get a sweet dream too, for you step into my dream…
    I feel so happy … if you are. What satisfied me is happiness round you everyday. I feel so happy when your smiling eyes plays in my lakes and ripples wave softly in my heart. I feel so happy when your whisper go across the frost and ice, dissolve the freezing cold, feed my passionate and emotion. I feel so happy when you know my heart.
    I feel so happy that if you are, especially it is me who give you.

    Love to An Angel
    At the time I drawn in sweetness, completely I believe she was the perfect angel I dreaming of for so long. I was paying for my totally childish foolishness. At the time I try my best efforts to pursue the true love, with my sincerely heart and timid action, love is far away from me little by little, painful and indifferent, without any hesitation and, even a back glimpse.
    At the time indeed I want to be a role in love, but actually what I play is a joke and woe. Even worse, myself didn’t realize it and smile sincerely from my heart. Even don’t know their laugh is laugh at me, not a symbol of support.
    At the time I want laugh to myself of the foolishness, blind self-proud, and day dreaming, my heart can’t help bleeding, and crying… …
    Only at the time painfully I wake up from the sweet dream did I realize that what the world is which I fall into. At this time, it was rainy outside. The dreaming world of inside and outside, both of the two are lonely ,crying all the time… …

    Sonnet 4

    From the wind summer heat slides
    And singing of cicada is die down
    Suddenly a piece of cold explodes
    What strikes me is the spreading brown

    In the wind the heart is shivering
    Not because the cold but being hurt
    All my world now is quivering
    Frosty no from the warm skirt

    Season is no quicker than your word
    Suddenly turned sharp cold
    Our story is very like of a bird
    Whose wings so difficult to hold

    Sooner the field will be covered by winter snow
    Sooner the memory will stir my missing grow



    Rhyme of Shakespear Sonnet:
    abab—cdcd—efef—gg


    Metaphor of Flower

    Stanza 1

    Diligent am I a lovely bee
    Whose sincerely heart you did not see

    For my horrible sting you won’t pay me a glance
    To beg your pleasure I have to study dance

    Attracted by your attractive fragrance
    Thousands of miles I cover is the distance

    While still won’t you bestow love on me
    Passionate I have but no key


    Aa –bb—bb—aa


    Stanza 2

    Sooner frost will cover you the rose
    And autumn wind will weigh down your nose

    Sooner you will become very old
    For blush is impossible to forever hold

    Until death can not you tell the difference
    Which nearly drive me out of the tolerance

    To dirty your beauty is the flea
    To sow your perfume is the bee

    Aa—bb—cc—dd


    Spring Dances Near

    Spring dances near
    Bring a lively view
    Happiness born with the following year
    Everything comes out is new

    Voice of spring is not far away
    For cloudy sky is clear
    To god sincerely will I pray
    For whom I give my best wishes to, my dear




    2.Philosophical Thought Of Existencism and Human Life--For the Mind


    Sonnet 1

    When was the crescent reigned by a full moon
    I’m afraid I know not
    While it deserts me so soon
    Indeed hurt me a lot

    The full moon is rising, and hanging in sky
    Looks like a plate of jade
    Lilies under are too sad to cry
    For wind is a symbol of going to fade

    Slight fragrance is touching the air
    As chrysanthemum just release its bud
    The waxing moon is complete and fair
    While lilies will be buried in the mud

    The old are soaked by tears and dew
    And life born on their bodies is new



    Sonnet 3

    The wind had already began his howl
    While winter has not come yet
    Motionless stands the fat owl
    So does the spider corner his net

    Cruel scissor the wind is indeed
    Leaves all cut and dead on the ground
    Autumn rain does his favor in need
    Nothing left when mother tree looks around

    Though spread all over are her seed
    Mother tree still weeping for her dead leaves
    Known that next year’s soil will they feed
    Perhaps no more sighs now as she heaves

    Don’t cry for the passed old
    Passing present is not easy to hold

    The Mirror

    When take off the coat that money painted
    When absent from the relationship that interests knitted
    When unload the mask hypocrisy decorated
    When the mirror tells your track that maturity carved

    Someone see himself but not the mirror
    while someone see nothing but the mirror


    Back and Search

    Suddenly bomb a small sound
    Suddenly and small
    Something seems drop on the ground
    Something did drop in this late fall

    I’m still walking on
    But hesitation slows my steps down
    I worry about whether I lost something
    And know not whether should I take a searching

    Then feeling of lost knock into my mind
    With a way of usual kind
    Finally I turned back and have a look
    Feeling of lost g me like a hook

    While the end is both pleasing and disappointing
    The result is that nothing had I lost
    Expect the feeling of I didn’t lost anything
    That’s what a back and a search cost






    3.Religious Poems--For the Suffered Saints


    The Pilgrim in the Snowy Night

    Heavy darkness completely cut the sight
    How greedy he is so that everything wanted to be buried
    A piece of dying light doesn't seem bright
    How heavy the sadness is the pilgrim carried

    Calling from God hears far away
    But through mountains and rivers I can see
    Wind's shouting can't shake the direction of my way
    Then let the more violent storm strike me

    People stay in the warm house watching and don't show a piece of pity
    My foolish deed is the example of their joke
    It seems that I should beg for their mercy
    And to trade for the understanding I want to be the coke

    What drives off their tears is the written poem
    How harmonically it is for everyone who worries about nothing sits by the fire
    They never knew how did the work written by the pilgrim
    They never knew how heavy the poet bear


    Bloody cross
    --Inspired by Passionate of Christ

    Bloody of the flamboyant of sunset
    Bloody of the dusky peak
    Bloody of the giant cross
    Bloody of the track in front and back

    Cross the bigger ride on you the smaller
    Cross the stronger ride on you the weaker
    Saliva and curse from different mouth
    Can’t dirty and frighten you
    As the whipping
    Can’t the hurt and harm you

    Ah, my lord
    Angel you are but nobody respects
    Prophet you are but no one believes
    But what your suffered is all witted by Father
    And every bloody track drive you nearer to the Heaven

    “Since you are son of god ,why can’t you help yourself?”
    Laughter broke out from their ignorant
    But you still smile in return and beg mercy for them

    Hatred kills your life
    But your love kills hatred
    They beat you to death
    But you bless them in return

    No groaning from mouth
    As well as no complaint from your heart
    Tears driven by seeing what you suffered
    While smile on your face for forgive all with love

    Return of Angel

    My last struggle finally got its praise
    The magnificent scene of which always appears in my dream
    Slowly opening is the door of paradise
    No more disaster would I suffer terminates the scream

    All scenes floated in my memories are so clear
    All fearing I suffered in the darkness still causing great pain so near
    Now all shining light ends the long night
    And all the horrors exposed in the sunrise

    I have a shower in the holy shine
    And all the dusts and scars fall off
    All crime I convicted is melting under the sunshine
    And my soul is reborn with the new wings

    In the shower whose sacred light I bear is the god
    In the shower whom I had an embrace with is the lord
    My destination is reaching after series of sublime cry
    My home is not dusty earth but the pure sky

    God’s will at the pilgrim find that
    The will the same with him
    The heaven is clearer, glimmer and purer
    The lonely wanderer finally become the respected angel in the praising

    All the difficulties I overcome in the darkness now
    Is dissolve in the sunrise
    While I still weep for my long time suffering
    The loaded dream is off and
    And the dream has become true
    The lost angel finally back to his paradise

    The magnificent return covered the tearful past
    With his exciting tears the Angel washed him dreadful dust
    Escape from unwilling remembrance he shakes off his heavy past
    His heart never ruined by the heavy thick dust

    A forever Angel shakes off his heavy story
    Forever pure, bright and sincere
    His paces of return is so fast
    How beautiful the halo is that his shinning wings cast



    Spirits of the Dark Night

    Spirits of the dark night dancing in the sky
    A vague view appears in the silent eye
    Everyone’s shouting and laughing
    While only me stay in my corner lone, and cry

    Spirits of the dark night shivering in the starlight
    So do the dreams of future in the moonlight
    So do the faded flowers in sensitive eyes
    So do the beautiful tears filling in lonely eyes

    Tears cannot wash out the shadowy past
    And sensitivity lost the battle against cruelty at last
    Angels with wings have no much sorrow to carry
    Eger to return to them, my heart will never rust

    I don’t know whether it is the dark guilty night blurs my sight
    Or my eyes blur the guilty night
    Only can I hear is the pace of spreading silence
    Only can I see is the scream of rising indifference

    Frost freezes the helpless flower
    Covered and control, a fitting shroud
    My emotion suffered too, of its power
    Drive out all my proud

    Highly standing are the stars insecure
    With their fate not sure
    Dizzy height bestow them of sublime
    And degeneration seems as an unbearable crime

    Eyes of spirits winking as the stars
    Glimmering a whole night of heaven’s stinging scars
    Look up the sky I bear the same anguish
    Whose eyes are winking I can not distinguish

    Glance from heaven grows dimmer on me
    Here I am, while can not they see
    Well, with a farewell I end the fierce fight
    Nothing can I do but back to my cold night




    Summer Stars—The Sleepless Scars
    ----To Vincent Van Gogh

    Hair of cypresses sticks into heart of the cloud
    Spire is touching deep of the sky
    Gethering all heat and brightness
    Starry sky is sparkling in the summer night

    Scatter all over the darkness are the burning stars
    Rolling and roaming far-away in the sky
    Keep all their eyes shut
    Silent houses had fall asleep under the summer night

    While still fighting in vain is the sleepless soul
    Now a fierce struggle in eyes of the sky
    No one knows whether summer night was painted by the soul
    Or the soul painted by the summer night

    Spiritual flood striking cell of sense
    Then all the world was distorted and revolving as the sky
    How brave the flame is of the burning stars
    Give birth to eternity of the summer night

    No one knows the restless and suffered soul
    Whose sorrow and burden simultaneously grow
    The eyes couldn’t topple are the isolated stars
    Glimmering and burning are the dark night scars



    Light the Dawn
    --Inspired by Lord Of The Rings

    Highly stand you at the top of the mountain
    Surveying the starry sky of hometown far away
    May be you could have fall in sleep now
    But the duty on your shoulder makes you forget the tired

    How sad the eyes in the darkness
    And the undiscribed pain floated little by little
    Who will hold your hand
    Go along with you even the future is unknown

    God won’t leave you
    And your weak heart will go longer feel lonely
    Stars will round you
    Even comes the dark clouds and the heavily snow

    Gently breeze whispered
    Take your missing to the friends in the hometown
    Received the regards from there
    The voice of storm is not so terrific

    Stars glaring your journey
    The earth welcomes you with her broad chest
    You buried your own happiness
    In order to light the dying candle of the mankind

    You get on the way far from home
    You get on the way full of danger
    You never be hesitated although the road is rough
    You never afraid of the great length of return journey although back may become
    A dream that will never come true

    But your faith will lead your direction to go ahead
    And your heart will never lost in puzzle

    Only you
    Fighting with the difficulties
    Debate the challenges with your wisdom
    With the weak shoulder you carried the heaviest duty
    The duty to save the world

    Your beautiful wish is to built a bridge
    Between the painful reality and the wonderful paradise
    The songs from your heart heard happily
    Your faith will lead you sailing to the dawn

    Lofty mountains murmured under your feet
    And the fate leads you to the highest height you ever touch
    Difficulties, sadness, loneness and the lure
    Everything you conquered as they are just weeds

    You’ll surely go ahead
    For the old men in the ruins calls for your determination
    For the women and children crying for their helpless calls for your hope
    You’ll sure go ahead
    Although the road full of horrible storm and heavily blow
    But the colorful clouds will make up your destination
    And every waiting for your return to crown you

    Every bloody track will blossom flower after enter the heaven
    The thing hidden in the frightened shaking every time is a beautiful
    Forget the under feet thorn and
    Stare at the starry sky upon to go ahead

    The running river will guide your way
    And the flower in the shadow of the trees’ will mark your road
    Carry on with the friendship, sincerity and trust
    What goes away is the passed sadness
    The wonderful world you’ll see in dawn is created by yourself


    4 Scenery Poems--For Mother Nature


    Voice of nature
    --Language of the wind

    Autumn
    Cruel the executioner be
    Kill all the plants in a single night
    Lord of the land is he
    Nothing left in an empty sight

    Winter
    Quietly he freezes the dead lake
    I don’t know the deed been done for whose sake
    For himself also trying to escape from the sharp cold
    And people’s body are his best choice so old

    Spring
    Gently she wakes up the childish seeds
    And dances to birds’ song and blossom laughter
    Ducks are the first who know her came through the reeds
    They play with her in the warm water

    Summer
    She moves the cloud hither and thither in the sky
    And the birds are enjoy their free fly
    A good cleaner I think she is indeed
    And for the birds up and down must carrying the water in need


    A language of Nature

    Language of the wind is the voice of the season
    Only master It can we read the heart of our mother nature
    Ignore it means the treason
    And we’ll degenerate to the worst creature



    Poems With a A-B-A-B Jumping Rhyme






    Snow sky

    Masses of clouds covered the sky
    And the snow flowers come out and cry
    I drown in sadness
    Through I don’t know why
    Why my mind still follows the snow
    Shake and fly


    Lonely stands the weak light
    The road disappears in the heavy night
    My heart flies or sinks, anywhere
    And the heavy snow stops me in a narrow sight

    How heavy the winds blow
    A falsely crying for the poor snow
    And the passengers with the heavy sadness
    Walks so hard, so determined, and so slow

    The first snow

    Snow flower come out in the wind
    Drawing an active picture
    So many of you
    Fall into the quiet ground quickly
    Have a new but, cold life silently at once

    The snow-covered trees stand in the wind
    So as to cure the lonely road
    Although itself need to be cure of

    The road should be reaching the mountain far away
    But was stopped by the heavy fog
    The road has no right to hate the fog
    And it only know s to cry for itself fail

    But who tell it, even more, who knows
    The fog prevent the road from the happiness of reach the mountain
    Or the disappointment after seeing the sadness of the mountain
    If should to hate the fog, or thanks to its save?
    Not only didn’t I find the joy I lost
    But also I lost my founding hope
    Coldness has no sound but covered the sky
    Who could hear my crying while I walk lonely in the night
    The tears run out for nothing to depend
    But the cold comes unlimitedly from my unlimited sadness
    The new year is nearly to come
    But my sadness increases while other feels so happy

    Light in the room brightly
    While only me search for the thing in the snowy night
    The thing I found wad not existing
    So what I got was more sadness

    My thought was sunk in the picture
    And I can’t divided the edge of the sky
    I don’t know weather the snow falls into my eyes
    Or my tears mixed my sight


    Wander In The Night

    I really can’t clean my heavy feeling since
    The plaintive music can’t get through the frozen scenery
    Unknown lost painted the lonely star hung high in the sky
    Night in reality didn’t have snowflake’s falling as in fantasy
    Wind whistles
    Even bleeding can’t wake up the steel heart
    Time of river follow the track of the scar
    Running all the time
    Yes, who knows ,where it will disturb or run to
    In the course of forgetting please don’t forget to watch
    How does the cruel reality bury the sincere sentiment



    Voice in the Wind

    At the top of the hill
    Dead grass is shaking in the wind
    The dream was waked up
    And crying in silence

    It seems that
    I had ever touched the narrow road
    But memory was covered
    By the fallen leaves through the ground

    I don’t know
    Whether my folded memory
    Unfolded in this dream
    Or my folded dream
    Unfolded in my memory

    The wind do not understand the sad crying
    Other’s sorrow, it cares not
    Only like it ask:
    Where were your wings of the old days?
    Where did you lost them?
    Where? I want to ask it too
    You, the roamer go through all over the world
    Could you tell me where they are?
    My heart had fall into pieces
    And I’m crying to find them


    Sky-Sad

    Sky of light color seems thinking about nothing
    And the magnificent colorful clouds drive away all the brilliant
    Pieces of clouds floating slowly and powerless
    Who paints them at will I think I know not
    View of the sky looks like clear soup
    Not a complete failure to be called but indeed a spoil one
    Dark color invades and spreads
    So a cold feeling strike my heart suddenly
    And a great pain caused
    I feel so sad for others seems so happy
    Feet of my youth haven’t touch the stage yet
    The wonderful program had already come to an end
    The cruel reality buried my lively sentiment
    Even worse I have to pay for its deed
    Finally I want to have a look at the hope in front so far away
    But masses of shrank insects dirtied the clarity window



    The Crescent

    The crescent looks like a little boat
    A little boat which takes me to my hometown
    My hometown now is in spring
    In spring’s warm night, flowers are coming out
    Coming out and waving in spring
    In spring’s sleepy sight , awake stood my hometown
    My hometown’s waiting for a little boat
    A little boat delivering my missing now, is the crescent


    Chinese Classical Poem of a circular rhyme

    A—B
    B—C
    C—D
    D—E
    E—D
    D—C
    C—B
    B—A


    The Green Wind
    ----Flower in the Wind

    Green wind kiss faces of the leaves
    And raindrops knock the doors of the buds
    While buds’ faces flushed with shy
    And leaves wave their hands showing their kind

    The End of August

    Your passion passes away with the verdant planting of summer
    But the running stream can’t take away the heavy love
    Levels of fell leaves covered the ground
    In which I search for the golden missing
    The emaciated face looks more sadly than the bloody sun’s
    And my misty eyes can’t see clearly both of yours

    The mountain seems farther than ever before
    Memory suddenly caught me with the help of fog
    Autumn rain is cleaning the moaning leaves lied quietly
    And the morning changed crying in the time I don’t know when


    The handkerchief made of cloud can’t dry my misty eyes
    The last drop of tears fall from the top of the flower





    Calling from God hears far away
    But through mountains and rivers I can see
    Wind's shouting can't shake the direction of my way
    Then let the more violent storm strike me

    People stay in the warm house watching and don't show a piece of pity
    My foolish deed is the example of their joke
    It seems that I should beg for their mercy
    And to trade for the understanding I want to be the coke

    What drives off their tears is the written poem
    How harmonically it is for everyone who worries about nothing sits by the fire
    They never knew how did the work written by the pilgrim
    They never knew how heavy the poet bear


    Bloody cross
    --Inspired by Passionate of Christ

    Bloody of the flamboyant of sunset
    Bloody of the dusky peak
    Bloody of the giant cross
    Bloody of the track in front and back

    Cross the bigger ride on you the smaller
    Cross the stronger ride on you the weaker
    Saliva and curse from different mouth
    Can’t dirty and frighten you
    As the whipping
    Can’t the hurt and harm you

    Ah, my lord
    Angel you are but nobody respects
    Prophet you are but no one believes
    But what your suffered is all witted by Father
    And every bloody track drive you nearer to the Heaven

    “Since you are son of god ,why can’t you help yourself?”
    Laughter broke out from their ignorant
    But you still smile in return and beg mercy for them

    Hatred kills your life
    But your love kills hatred
    They beat you to death
    But you bless them in return

    No groaning from mouth
    As well as no complaint from your heart
    Tears driven by seeing what you suffered
    While smile on your face for forgive all with love

    Return of Angel

    My last struggle finally got its praise
    The magnificent scene of which always appears in my dream
    Slowly opening is the door of paradise
    No more disaster would I suffer terminates the scream

    All scenes floated in my memories are so clear
    All fearing I suffered in the darkness still causing great pain so near
    Now all shining light ends the long night
    And all the horrors exposed in the sunrise

    I have a shower in the holy shine
    And all the dusts and scars fall off
    All crime I convicted is melting under the sunshine
    And my soul is reborn with the new wings

    In the shower whose sacred light I bear is the god
    In the shower whom I had an embrace with is the lord
    My destination is reaching after series of sublime cry
    My home is not dusty earth but the pure sky

    God’s will at the pilgrim find that
    The will the same with him
    The heaven is clearer, glimmer and purer
    The lonely wanderer finally become the respected angel in the praising

    All the difficulties I overcome in the darkness now
    Is dissolve in the sunrise
    While I still weep for my long time suffering
    The loaded dream is off and
    And the dream has become true
    The lost angel finally back to his paradise

    The magnificent return covered the tearful past
    With his exciting tears the Angel washed him dreadful dust
    Escape from unwilling remembrance he shakes off his heavy past
    His heart never ruined by the heavy thick dust

    A forever Angel shakes off his heavy story
    Forever pure, bright and sincere
    His paces of return is so fast
    How beautiful the halo is that his shinning wings cast



    Spirits of the Dark Night


    Spirits of the dark night dancing in the sky
    A vague view appears in the silent eye
    Everyone’s shouting and laughing
    While only me stay in my corner lone, and cry

    Spirits of the dark night shivering in the starlight
    So do the dreams of future in the moonlight
    So do the faded flowers in sensitive eyes
    So do the beautiful tears filling in lonely eyes

    Tears cannot wash out the shadowy past
    And sensitivity lost the battle against cruelty at last
    Angels with wings have no much sorrow to carry
    Eger to return to them, my heart will never rust

    I don’t know whether it is the dark guilty night blurs my sight
    Or my eyes blur the guilty night
    Only can I hear is the pace of spreading silence
    Only can I see is the scream of rising indifference

    Frost freezes the helpless flower
    Covered and control, a fitting shroud
    My emotion suffered too, of its power
    Drive out all my proud

    Highly standing are the stars insecure
    With their fate not sure
    Dizzy height bestow them of sublime
    And degeneration seems as an unbearable crime

    Eyes of spirits winking as the stars
    Glimmering a whole night of heaven’s stinging scars
    Look up the sky I bear the same anguish
    Whose eyes are winking I can not distinguish

    Glance from heaven grows dimmer on me
    Here I am, while can not they see
    Well, with a farewell I end the fierce fight
    Nothing can I do but back to my cold night




    Summer Stars—The Sleepless Scars
    ----To Vincent Van Gogh

    Hair of cypresses sticks into heart of the cloud
    Spire is touching deep of the sky
    Gethering all heat and brightness
    Starry sky is sparkling in the summer night

    Scatter all over the darkness are the burning stars
    Rolling and roaming far-away in the sky
    Keep all their eyes shut
    Silent houses had fall asleep under the summer night

    While still fighting in vain is the sleepless soul
    Now a fierce struggle in eyes of the sky
    No one knows whether summer night was painted by the soul
    Or the soul painted by the summer night

    Spiritual flood striking cell of sense
    Then all the world was distorted and revolving as the sky
    How brave the flame is of the burning stars
    Give birth to eternity of the summer night

    No one knows the restless and suffered soul
    Whose sorrow and burden simultaneously grow
    The eyes couldn’t topple are the isolated stars
    Glimmering and burning are the dark night scars



    Light the Dawn
    --Inspired by Lord Of The Rings

    Highly stand you at the top of the mountain
    Surveying the starry sky of hometown far away
    May be you could have fall in sleep now
    But the duty on your shoulder makes you forget the tired

    How sad the eyes in the darkness
    And the undiscribed pain floated little by little
    Who will hold your hand
    Go along with you even the future is unknown

    God won’t leave you
    And your weak heart will go longer feel lonely
    Stars will round you
    Even comes the dark clouds and the heavily snow

    Gently breeze whispered
    Take your missing to the friends in the hometown
    Received the regards from there
    The voice of storm is not so terrific

    Stars glaring your journey
    The earth welcomes you with her broad chest
    You buried your own happiness
    In order to light the dying candle of the mankind

    You get on the way far from home
    You get on the way full of danger
    You never be hesitated although the road is rough
    You never afraid of the great length of return journey although back may become
    A dream that will never come true

    But your faith will lead your direction to go ahead
    And your heart will never lost in puzzle

    Only you
    Fighting with the difficulties
    Debate the challenges with your wisdom
    With the weak shoulder you carried the heaviest duty
    The duty to save the world

    Your beautiful wish is to built a bridge
    Between the painful reality and the wonderful paradise
    The songs from your heart heard happily
    Your faith will lead you sailing to the dawn

    Lofty mountains murmured under your feet
    And the fate leads you to the highest height you ever touch
    Difficulties, sadness, loneness and the lure
    Everything you conquered as they are just weeds

    You’ll surely go ahead
    For the old men in the ruins calls for your determination
    For the women and children crying for their helpless calls for your hope
    You’ll sure go ahead
    Although the road full of horrible storm and heavily blow
    But the colorful clouds will make up your destination
    And every waiting for your return to crown you

    Every bloody track will blossom flower after enter the heaven
    The thing hidden in the frightened shaking every time is a beautiful
    Forget the under feet thorn and
    Stare at the starry sky upon to go ahead

    The running river will guide your way
    And the flower in the shadow of the trees’ will mark your road
    Carry on with the friendship, sincerity and trust
    What goes away is the passed sadness
    The wonderful world you’ll see in dawn is created by yourself




    5.Recalling Return of Humanism--For Mordern Society

    A Doll
    --A Worker of the Coal Mine

    Dedicate to all the people who suffered
                 

             The things do harm to his physical
             Is the coal powders which fly hither and thither
             They take his lung for their home
             And can’t help rushing there to settle down
                  
             The thing govern his mind
             s his motto
    “ Working is the most glorious in the world ”
    Responlity planted deeply in his heart is the arch-criminal kill him little
    By little
    The leaders shout aloud
    “ Hey, comrades, working hard the whole life to server people ,and
    you won’t feel ashame for your hehavior !”
    But except the workers , who also reflect on himself for his deed
    Who indeed should feel ashame for his propagated words
    For their variance words and deeds

    Worker’s vertebra bend to the leaders with the passing days
    In which the suns and lights he can’t see
    Little by little
    The upright boy can’t make his back upright

    He had already don’t know what the tired is
    Because he is so tired
    The only thing he know is his motto
    The physical pain can’t press the complain

    At the end ,he reach his destination
    With the result of sacrifice himself for sake of the “people”
    The useless fame is the only pay for all the distater he suffered
    “ He is too young so he could have work for ‘peole’ for a long time
    Server us and pay for our dinner and all our costs ”
    That’s why the leaders feel a pity
    That’s the best judement and consolation for his selfless devotion

    Only the board-minded leaders didn't feel heartbreak at all
    For the adccident happened in the coal mine
    They walked out the shadow of the set-back so quickly
    And continue to find the best consolation in the winecup

    They still waiting somebody with comepletely patience at the dinner
    table
              Who will he be can't it be the worker
              How can it be
              How does his rank highly enough to allow him come here
    And have the right to bring his intelligence and wisdom into play



    With my full respect to show the complientment to coal mine workers and all the labours, and also the people who has the same compassionate to the people who suffered.
    This poem base compassinate to the peole suffered,espeially to the coal mine workers. My father is one of them ,and I had seen how difficult their working environment are and how do the leaders behave by my own sight. This poem show my anger how the human rights being damage under a mind of “Worker’s Political Power” being called,and I could do nothing for it . I feel sad and helpless. The workers even don't notice that because the govern of mind .That’s the biggest sadness that make people don’t have their mind just like slave.And that mind even propagated as the best mind in the world . It’s indeed good for the governors to control fool people working for them easily. I can’t do nothing now but show my passion in my poem .It’s my wealth that made me feel pround.

    Feeling Injured
    ---Under the Shadow of Power

    Wind from the darkness is silent
    There’s nothing but passion and sad
    Fierce my heart
    Sensitive words was injured by the heavy mind

    Who streaming from the wound is not the dead blood
    But the lively hope
    Passion is the flame burning in the ice
    But in reality dream can not wonder
    In the place where it was born
    Mind, the weak in shivering is still dreaming
    How can he enter his paradise from reality the hell





    Black Silence

    Go to washing tonight
    I come across a student I recognize
    While this remove me from peaceful delight

    Usual for joke I could find something to criticize
    While this time I know not what to say
    I drag my lips as a smile, indeed a small size

    Finally it comes to a bay
    Find a topic to share I had already cannot
    Just stare at the dim ray

    Sighs in deep of my heart heaves a lot
    Stocks too hard to be soaked, like the rocks
    Things be washed is not only clothes I got

    The silence I fall into feel like locks
    And it is as black as my stocks


    Aba—bcb—cdc—efe--ff

    6.Translation of A Chinese Ancinet Poem

    A English Poem Translate From A Chinese Classical Poem

    Silver Missing in the Moonlight

    The moon seems born from the sea
    Rising, and hung in the sky
    A silver shadow cast on both you and me
    While the lovely night is neither yours nor mine

    Stand on two edges of the horizon
    At the same time of the same night
    Both of us draw in missing under the moon
    Missing in vain in a misty sight

    Distance give birth to the silver missing
    And silver missing give birth to a sleepless night
    Silver night painted the distant missing
    And sleepless missing takes up my mind for a whole night

    The moon is bright enough to give a sight
    So I stop the burning of the candle light
    The autumn is cold enough to give a shiver
    So I pick up a coat, which covered with silver

    With bright moonlight full of my hand
    I’m so eager to give
    But reality is not a wonderland
    And the moon light is about to leave

    Heave a sigh, and expecting back to my dream
    Perhaps only in this way can I give them to you
    When the moon take back her last piece of beam
    The missing soaked by autumn dew


    7.Tears of Innocent
    --on Black Fairy Tales

    Tears of Innocent
    --on Black Fairy Tales


    Children the seeds are. It is the stories that plough their early mind, and give them dawn of sensitive.
    Innocent the children are. Their smiles from their hearts are pure, and their tears from their eyes are sincere. It is the story that light them and make up the basic on which their future character to base.
    I suppose that no one doesn’t miss the period when we laying in bed, listening to mothers’ lively and attractive story which not only hold our nerves, but also wake up our early wildness, and then desire for search of love, longing for knowledge, pity for the suffered and passionate for literature come.
    Now back to the key. On Fairy Tales, personally I would like to separate them into two kind, two opposite kind the golden, and the black.
    Golden, symbol of sunshine, the bright, give everything warm, give courage to human. This kind of Fairy Tales seldom set cruel adversities and terrific setbacks for our characters in it, and, with a happy ending.
    We’ll get a wonderful smile from our heart. Once our princess crying, or the little animals weeping, fairy thing appears and, then aids given. It is a circle but children like it .There always magic help out of difficulty when our characters feel sad. Finally princess meets her dreaming prince and they get married and, the little lost animal get back home. These stories never give deep sadness, crying is the most cruel punish to our girls and then quickly she will get help. They give children happy smile and early optimism. Magic will always help the good plant deep of their mind made them fantastic and optimistic. The majority of the Fairy Tales are of this kind. Instances are countless, such as The Ugly Little Duck, Snow White, Cinderella, Frog Province and so on. But golden Fairy Tales is not what I want to talk about but Black Fairy Tales is. I give it that name .Yes, you may ignore them for indeed they are in a very small proportion. They give you neither smile nor feelings. Instead, they trying to bring sad and tears, but more passion. They just a black and gloomy tragedy.
    Give it that name, I get inspire from Black Humor. Black means despair, gloomy, dark, terror, cruel and painstaking. Face all these, people laugh at themselves with their indifferent songs, and make a distance from the reality, in order to protect the suffered dignity from ruined. It shows how ridiculous the world is, and degeneration of human beings and, how sad the self-struggle in vain is when the ideal principal fails.
    That is what Black Fairy Tales also want to express in some extent the suffering and painstaking of the little and weak.
    This is the original source where Black comes from. Now I want to take some examples of that kind of Fairy Tales ,and show my views of it. I explore this kind of it ,and myself get one .This just could used as a sample to explain my view of it.
    You must have read these Fairy Tales Nightingale And the Red Rose, The Little Mermaid ,the Happy Prince and The Little Match Girl. They are typically Black Fairy Tales .They drive our tears, and touch our heart.
    Reading them with our heart, our mind ,we will never say that the Fairy Tales are fantastic or, childish. As they are as real as the adult novel, and indeed a touched tragedy. And from reckoning in the Fairy Tales, we will sure dreaming of a better place-a paradise for our children heart pure mind without even a piece of dust to live in. Calling for kind ,sincerity and sympathy. This is what Black Fairy Tales gives reckoning for love and sincerity and built a paradise for pure mind with the innocent tears driven by.
    Now I’d like to explain and carry my theory with my own poem, and fairy tales.



    Mid night dancing

    No one take care of the faded bud
    But the passing passion still garrisoned by the rusted mail
    The homeless ghosts began to take a walk
    And the dead doll dances slowly
    But beautiful, with slight smile but heavy step
    Season of the flower now expelled by a simple
    But mysterious spell
    Is it the black spider at the corner buries all
    And plaiting net of memory, the thick dusty past
    Now, who is watching far away eager to join
    And, who lays in the tomb eager a hopeless rescue
    Heave a deep sigh, for the wind is crying
    Heave a deep sigh, for the rainy tears
    Heave a deep sigh, for the mountainous tragedy
    Heave a deep sigh, for the tomb that night put himself in

    No matter
    No mater how happy your dances are
    Never can you escape from your destine
    For murmured song to which you dance is so sad
    And a forever prisoner had foredained


    Mid night dancing
    A doll, old, dirty and broken, is deserted by her master .But she become a man in the mid of the night with the help of the witch, who also could change a man into a doll with her evil power.
    The girl, the original master of the doll goes wrong, under the virtual prosperity. The castle, also deserted, giving off significant lights and attractive music is under control of the witch.
    Finally, the girl discovers the secret what the witch do to make a man to a doll. But bad luck also follows. No longer dare she enjoy the midnight dancing .She want to escape but there??s nothing she could do.
    The kind doll forgive what the girl done with her, and manage to prevent the girl from become a doll –like she used to be-the forever prisoner. But herself become gray ashes in the great flame, together with her life giver the evil witch .Nothing left but the red hairpin, bloody red which the girl gives to her so many years ago.

    It is a metaphor that shows how selfless parents are to try their best protecting their children from all harm, even they were deserted by their children when they are in an old age. A society is the witch, she lures the children but parents always rescue them by self sacrifice. Also in this fairytales I show ancient culture and modern culture, saints and mortals and others complex relationships. It is a multisided diamond so you can see different beautiful from different side.

    8.Language of My Mood--For My Silent Sorrowful Life



    Anger and shrivel

    Hatred and rage in heart is gathering
    But even an explosion is useless to touch
    The reality in silence was frozen
    And the world is dead and no response

    Day after day
    Night after night
    Wake up and fall asleep
    And so on, and so on

    The rage got vanished
    While vague conscience remained
    Feeling feels likes the foam
    But too heavy to fly

    The whole thing happened
    As mermaid’s grandma’s words of the opposite direction
    Who vanished is the foam of rage
    And despair born as a new life
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    Wow I think is the best response possible after glancing through that amazing collection of work. I'll defeinetly try to read through all of them carefully, but I must say from a first glance it's quite impressive, especially considering english is not your first language!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Caravaggio View Post
    Wow I think is the best response possible after glancing through that amazing collection of work. I'll defeinetly try to read through all of them carefully, but I must say from a first glance it's quite impressive, especially considering english is not your first language!

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    Thank you so much for your response and courage.Thank you.I'll continue my work and improve my English.And obviously English is so important.Besides , may I ask whether you could tell me where can I publish them? I wish I could share our interest with more people ,whose is less an less nowadays and so difficult to find.

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    Couldnt check the whole collection, but of the first few, i liked the Sonnet 4 very much. Very nice ones, warlik. Keep them coming.
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    yes more please!

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    Thank you so much. I love Sonnet 4 also. It's my song to Molly.And I feel sweet sad when I writing things for her , and missing her.

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    WOW you r pro at writing a poem.
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    WOW! Very good poems, warlike! My favourites is My Love to Thee Is the Sun, Sonnet 1 and 4.

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    this is more than great, i really loved readin it

    My Love to Thee Is the Sun and ONLY YOU .. i loved them alot .

    great work & well written poems
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    He lived, and when he lost his angel, died.
    It happened calmly, on its own,
    The way the night comes when day is done."



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    hi

    this is so nice
    this is best effort
    but you should publish this work in book.its deserve.

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