(before I start, I want you to know that I love when you call me Frenchie )
I think your answer sounds very intelligent, as usual, Teacher!
You are right, you are free to read it the way you want.
I had no idea that narratives required a change, though. We'll have to talk more about that. About other things, too.
AuntShecky, thanks for this comment. Dialogue would have been good, I guess, but I have noticed that I have trouble with that, I always tend to write the thoughts instead. I think adding a few more images would be nice too, I agree. Thank you very much.