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    in a blue moon amuse's Avatar
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    lines

    who wrote those lines
    who reads her lines?
    what etched them beside
    her lips, under her cheeks,
    into her frowns.
    why were they never
    erased, softened
    does she remember him
    anymore or is he
    enfolded in the crease beneath her lids.
    who danced the can-can
    on this stage, in the chorus
    on broadway,
    where did she go
    to reach this place
    and does she remember where
    she came from
    does she know why
    she left
    does she care anymore
    these lines drew arcs and curves in the
    air before
    dropping atom bombs
    paraded before general assemblies,
    the third reich, and
    their bullets enfiladed down
    the trenches of devil's den in
    1863.
    there are lines where she works and
    she plants in straight ones
    the flowers never free to
    scatter, wander, distribute themselves
    passionately
    her face is like
    her flowers,
    grainy with life,
    conformity, sorrow
    lines that she couldn't escape,
    a life that she couldn't
    change, a story that she couldn't
    bury like manure
    she wears her manure,
    wears her story but no
    one listens, now one sees,
    they walk like birds and bees
    dancing on their own invisible string down the road of
    life.
    Last edited by amuse; 07-26-2004 at 10:02 PM.
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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    omg...as always As, i had to read it twice and i am still not sure that i have absorbed it all...wow what a deep poem.

    i love this imagery:
    "the flowers never free to
    scatter, wander, distribute themselves
    passionately"

    farmed, like us.
    Then we sat on the edge of the earth, with our feet dangling over the side, and marvelled that we had found each other.

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    mm. that's really insightful.
    i mean that in a good way, btw!
    shh!!!
    the air and water have been here a long time, and they are telling stories.

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