Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: Trust

  1. #1
    Manny2
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    116
    Blog Entries
    8

    Trust

    Life is about trust,
    Without trust you have nothing.
    No relationships, no friends, just nothing.

    I trusted to easily,
    Fell so hard into the lies.
    Believed what you said,
    Knowing none of it was true;
    Just wishing it was.

    You lied to me.
    Said I could trust you,
    But that is not true.
    Although I know the truth
    The lies will always be there,
    Only reflecting you.

    What we had is gone,
    You let your lies ruin it all.
    Too afraid to say the truth
    But I am no better;
    For I sit there and believe you
    When I know better.
    All you have for me is lies
    Life is about trust,
    Without it there is nothing.
    Last edited by manny2; 10-21-2007 at 06:19 PM.
    "You may win some, you may lose some, but you'll never be there again"

  2. #2
    Haribol Acharya blazeofglory's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2007
    Location
    Kathmandu
    Posts
    4,959
    Quote Originally Posted by manny2 View Post
    Life is about trust
    Without trust you have nothing
    No relationships, no friends, just nothing
    I trusted to easily
    Fell so hard into the lies
    Believed what you said
    Knowing none of it was true
    Just wishing it was
    You lied to me
    Said I could trust you
    But that is not true
    Although I know the truth
    The lies will always be there
    Only reflecting you
    What we had is gone
    You let your lies ruin it all
    Too afraid to say the truth
    But I am no better
    For I sit there and believe you
    When I know better
    All you have for me is lies
    Life is about trust
    Without it there is nothing
    Wow !! You are amazing. You have crafted it superbly. I has everything a poem must have, a tinge of juxtaposition, spoof and mockery. I am convinced of the truth that trusht is no not limited to truths but to lies, and this is a matter subtle indeed, and hardly can other understand this intricacy better than a poet and you proved it.

    “Those who seek to satisfy the mind of man by hampering it with ceremonies and music and affecting charity and devotion have lost their original nature””

    “If water derives lucidity from stillness, how much more the faculties of the mind! The mind of the sage, being in repose, becomes the mirror of the universe, the speculum of all creation.

  3. #3
    Manny2
    Join Date
    Oct 2007
    Posts
    116
    Blog Entries
    8
    thank you! it was difficult to write like that, a lot of mix ups
    "You may win some, you may lose some, but you'll never be there again"

Similar Threads

  1. News
    By Scheherazade in forum Serious Discussions
    Replies: 1250
    Last Post: 03-11-2014, 09:02 AM
  2. Hamlet and trust
    By hamdizzle in forum Hamlet
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 10-07-2007, 10:26 PM
  3. Aphorism #234 Never trust your Honour to another, unless you have his in Pledge.
    By Admin in forum Balthasar Gracian's The Art of Worldly Wisdom
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 03-20-2007, 11:20 AM
  4. Aphorism #178 Trust your Heart,
    By Admin in forum Balthasar Gracian's The Art of Worldly Wisdom
    Replies: 0
    Last Post: 01-23-2007, 12:20 PM
  5. trust
    By ominous in forum Personal Poetry
    Replies: 1
    Last Post: 12-06-2005, 06:51 PM

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •