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    Bruised and beaten

    Beaten and bruised
    I lay down my trials and tribulations
    At the feet of the Lord
    Oh may an answer come
    May His will be done
    For he knows best

    Bruised and beaten
    Feeling I can continue no more
    Bruised and beaten
    Lying on the floor

    An immediate answer is what I need
    But what I think and God knows
    Are two different things
    He only does what is best
    Even if it hurts

    Bruised and beaten
    Feeling like I can continue no more
    Bruised and beaten
    Lying on the floor

    My trust in God I put
    My life, my everything
    He is the safest place be
    My Father, Saviour and Friend



    still needs quite a bit off editing, but this is basically what it says
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    Quote Originally Posted by sycho_warrior
    Bruised and beaten
    Feeling I can continue no more
    Bruised and beaten
    Lying on the floor

    An immediate answer is what I need
    But what I think and God knows
    Are two different things
    My trust in God I put
    My life, my everything
    i like these lines. really nice.
    shh!!!
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    I really like this. I like the way the rhymes work and the rhythym of the words..its like a song. I also like how though bruised and beaten..there is a place of safety, trusting in ' My Father, Saviour and Friend.'

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