Sincere sympathies... Just found out a dear friend of mine passed away this morning too
Enjoyed the logic of your "z" poem
"Angels don’t come to the reservation." Natalie Diaz; Seraphym Subjugation of a Wild Indian Rezervation... https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/a...n-rezervation/
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Thanks. I am sorry for you too!
Wonderful poem! The a, b,c, of Indian cultural supression. No analysis needed. Needed is Nalanda
Abhay Ka Brazilian corresponding text. Put the poem in my other American forum.
"Bakhtiyar and his men".Nalanda by Abhay K
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...5/nalanda.html
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
"a falling humanity" (sigh)... An enlightened call.
"Call down the hawk from the air;" - William Butler Yeats; The Hawk... https://www.public-domain-poetry.com...yeats/hawk-136
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
"The Hawk..".Powerfull poem...Enjoyed specially strophe 1 and 2.
"Dartmeet - a mob of waters".Dart [Extract]by Alice Oswald
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...xtract%5D.html
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed the confluence of waters that comingled into a poem
"Early each spring the little wren" - Charles Sangster; The Wren... https://www.public-domain-poetry.com...ter/wren-30344
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
The Wren...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!
"Fair tiny rosebud! what a tide"."To My First Born" by Rosanna Eleanor Leprohon
https://www.public-domain-poetry.com...etter=F&page=2
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Having to use old Safari browser for Windows...
Enjoyed! Found your poem here with a short analysis: https://allpoetry.com/poem/8529163-T...eanor-Leprohon
"Give me hunger," Carl Sandburg; At a Window... https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/at-a-window/
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
re: What is wrong with your usual browser? Litnet page lacerated?
Suggestions if the problem appears again with Safari:
Litnet works on Duck Duck, Sea Monkey and probably Midori. They are all very jurasic and therefore Google or Whatever canīt disfunctionalize Litnet. I use them only for LitNet, for other sites I use a modern browser
re; Thanks for the analysis which shows that the poem is typical for the 19C. The bio of the author brought some surprises:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rosanna_Eleanor_Leprohon
re:At a Window...Extraordinary poem but if I have to choose I prefer Food to love.
"Had I the sweet resounding lyre"."The Flower of Gnido" by Garcilaso de la Vega
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
re: Browser - Jurassic, lol. This page wasn't allowing any replies for some reason and I couldn't get a work-around using Opera. Opera had been a bit wonky on earlier pages and I had to keep signing... so this page only I resorted to old Safari for Windows and it allowed me to post... wonder if Opera will work on this page today... find out in a second...
re: Browser - Jurassic, lol. This page wasn't allowing any replies for some reason and I couldn't get a work-around using Opera. Opera had been a bit wonky on earlier pages and I had to keep signing... so this page only I resorted to old Safari for Windows and it allowed me to post... wonder if Opera will work on this page today... find out in a second... Ok... working today?
Ack! Worked for a moment then my edited reply gakked and got signed out again... luckily I copied my post to the clipboard:
Gnido: http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...-of-gnido.html
Tragic poem... I've read it three times and need to research a little more to get the full impact.
"I would my soul were like the bird" - Edwin Markham;
The Daring One... https://www.poetryoutloud.org/poem/the-daring-one/
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tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
I wish you luck with the new browser.
This may help with Garcilaso, itīs not an easy poet:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garcil...la_Vega_(poet)
The Daring One- AAAIII! Postmodern courage and fragility!
"Knows if the bough breaks, still his wings
Will bear him upward while he sings!"
"Jesu! bless our slender boat,".Hymn (For the boatmen, as they approach the rapids under The Castle of Heidelberg)
by William Wordsworth
http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...elberg%29.html
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Fighting browser issues AND internet throttling... using Safari for Windows and my cell phone hotspot for now. This page is not being kind: "do not have permission to post", or some such rot.
re: "Jesu..." - Must be some rapids ! Enjoyed
"Karshish, the picker-up of learning's crumbs," - Robert Browning; An Epistle - Containing the Strange Medical Experience of Karshish, the Arab Physician... https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poe...arab-physician
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Karshish-a different version of Jesus' ride to Jerusalem. Have to go back to it.
"Like two cathedral towers these stately pines"."My Cathedral" by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow
https://www.litscape.com/author/Henr...Cathedral.html
Links that may help
https://www.siteuptime.com/blog/2018...-find-out-why/
https://forums.opera.com/topic/66843...-opera-browser
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"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Ab-so-tively lovely poem by HWL... Reminds me for my Thursdays at Two poetry group today I'm sharing Trees by Joyce Kilmer for our segment of sharing a poem by another poet:
1886 - 1918 Kilmer published his last poetry collection, Main Street and Other Poems (George H. Doran Company, 1917), the same year he enlisted in the U.S. Army to serve in World War I, during which time he continued to write poems while fighting in the Sixty-Ninth Regiment. He died of a gunshot from a German sniper on July 30, 1918. -wikipedia
I think that I shall never see
A poem lovely as a tree.
A tree whose hungry mouth is prest
Against the earth's sweet flowing breast;
A tree that looks at God all day,
And lifts her leafy arms to pray;
A tree that may in summer wear
A nest of robins in her hair;
Upon whose bosom snow has lain;
Who intimately lives with rain.
Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.(poem in the public domain)
Thanx... I'll check the links out
"My muse demands study in all her ways to know" - Captain Cur; Trust In What You Write... https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/trus...hat-you-write/
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tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Enjoyed the tree poem. Again I was surprised that Joyce was a man
"Trust In What You Write..." Sound advice by Captain Cur.
"Nay! Stranger! smile not at this little dome,"Apology for the Little Naval Temple, on Storrs Point, Windermere" by John Wilson http://www.poetryatlas.com/poetry/po...dermere.htmlby
"I seemed to have sensed also from an early age that some of my experiences as a reader would change me more as a person than would many an event in the world where I sat and read. "
Gerald Murnane, Tamarisk Row
Enjoyed ! Didn't know England had a Lake District, though one reads of their many rivers. I look at the proximity to other countries and am amazed. Hard to believe England is so much smaller than California in area... It's stature is so much greater.
"Oh, vain is the stern protesting" - Ella Wheeler Wilcox; The Tides... https://www.public-domain-poetry.com...ox/tides-32879
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
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