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    Quote Originally Posted by blazeofglory View Post
    In fact, no poem is a bad poem and poems come from the heart and they can not be bad at all. For heart is where life is nestled and in fact what heart comes upon is not a thing of flaws.

    I like your poem and particularly these lines deepen our feelings.

    Let us be united in a kiss of pure bliss
    For we have spent our lives waiting only
    waiting and now it has come at last to this!

    These lines have something what life finally arrives at, and every creature have to ultimately, and like plants coming to fruition, and women birthing babies. Who dares to say without a preoccupation these are bad lines?
    I don't know what to say, blazeofglory. I think there is such a thing as bad poetry. Isn't there some poetry you prefer reading to other poetry? Might some of those preferences be based on the quality of the poetry rather than just your personal taste?

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    last year this day,
    made love
    all day
    dove rhymes with love

    Quote Originally Posted by AimusSage View Post
    I spel mitsake not like you
    In poerty I exel
    When peel from nose some snot
    We al loves to yel
    My bad poerty suck
    And exel at write poerty
    yes! very bad indeed

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    Very apt, Bartholomew, very apt.

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    To my beloved one

    Ah! My love why cannout thou see
    Just how much I love thee.
    I feel so desperate and weak
    Because I haven’t seen you for a week.
    Without you I’m just a mope
    Drowning in tears, so throw me rope
    And give my life hope.

    ********

    it is even worse that I expected... hee hee... but it was fun!

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    Thursday’s Reminiscence of a Lunatic

    Are you so very annoyed about Wednesday?
    You won’t confine yourself here,
    to be exact;
    are you earnest at last,
    then we must hurry
    to arrange your contract.
    Everyone’s raving about Wednesday.
    I was distinguished inside that day, you know.
    I stretched my neck with nervous looks to see,
    where I lived was gone,
    along with the light from that day,
    my clothes are the same and I know
    somewhere are my books of select accounting.
    Are you aware of this fact about Wednesday?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Aiculík View Post
    To my beloved one

    Ah! My love why cannout thou see
    Just how much I love thee.
    I feel so desperate and weak
    Because I haven’t seen you for a week.
    Without you I’m just a mope
    Drowning in tears, so throw me rope
    And give my life hope.

    ********

    it is even worse that I expected... hee hee... but it was fun!
    O, I like it, Aiculík, the intensity and that desparate.
    There is no polite way
    of being happy

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    Speaking of bad poetry, here's my ode to latex!


    Latex, oh Latex black!
    Thou art the clothes of fetishism
    It is because of thee
    That a dominatrix can be
    So domineering of men
    who suffer at thine hand.
    Catsuit, Latex gloves.
    There is no darkness, there is no light, there is only Lasagne!

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    Your rod and reel are waiting
    The air has cooled way down
    The water is clear and inviting
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    You’ve worked hard all week
    Worries have weighted you down
    Now that the week is ending
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    Blood pressure needs to be lowered
    And tempers need to calm
    You need your time for thinking
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    Take one of the kids with you
    You have a memory to make
    I know it all sounds tempting
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    The lawn needs a mowing
    The gutters could be cleaned
    House work will still be waiting
    Why don't you just go fishing?


    I've finally found something I've good at: Bad Poetry!!!
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    Inspired by a Cinquain by Cdn

    You fog up my glasses,
    Like a walk in Miami
    Like the forest in Thailand
    Humid after a rain
    Like the glass in the shower
    Like the car when we make out
    You fog up my glasses
    Come fog them again.

    Come give me a Kleenex
    So at least I can see you
    If only for a moment
    As your lips meet mine
    Flick your tongue on my ear lobe
    In my hair run your fingers
    You can write our initials
    Come fog me again

    Quote Originally Posted by Granny5 View Post
    Your rod and reel are waiting
    The air has cooled way down
    The water is clear and inviting
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    You’ve worked hard all week
    Worries have weighted you down
    Now that the week is ending
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    Blood pressure needs to be lowered
    And tempers need to calm
    You need your time for thinking
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    Take one of the kids with you
    You have a memory to make
    I know it all sounds tempting
    Why don’t you just go fishing?
    The lawn needs a mowing
    The gutters could be cleaned
    House work will still be waiting
    Why don't you just go fishing?


    I've finally found something I've good at: Bad Poetry!!!
    Let's see woul I rather clean the guttes or go fly fishing? Hmmm exit stage right! A very good bad poem, Granny.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AimusSage View Post
    Speaking of bad poetry, here's my ode to latex!


    Latex, oh Latex black!
    Thou art the clothes of fetishism
    It is because of thee
    That a dominatrix can be
    So domineering of men
    who suffer at thine hand.
    Catsuit, Latex gloves.

    This is just wonderfully bad.

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    Quote Originally Posted by AimusSage View Post
    Speaking of bad poetry, here's my ode to latex!


    Latex, oh Latex black!
    Thou art the clothes of fetishism
    It is because of thee
    That a dominatrix can be
    So domineering of men
    who suffer at thine hand.
    Catsuit, Latex gloves.
    YES! I love this! Hilariously bad! Isn't weird praising stuff for being bad?! I should introduce this to my teachers.

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    Granny, I just realized I must have hit the wrong button when I responded to your poem. I didn't mean to let my bad poem get in the way of your bad poem...oh well.

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    se non e vero, e molto ben'trovato

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    Quote Originally Posted by firefangled View Post
    Inspired by a Cinquain by Cdn

    You fog up my glasses,
    Like a walk in Miami
    Like the forest in Thailand
    Humid after a rain
    Like the glass in the shower
    Like the car when we make out
    You fog up my glasses
    Come fog them again.

    Come give me a Kleenex
    So at least I can see you
    If only for a moment
    As your lips meet mine
    Flick your tongue on my ear lobe
    In my hair run your fingers
    You can write our initials
    Come fog me again



    Let's see woul I rather clean the guttes or go fly fishing? Hmmm exit stage right! A very good bad poem, Granny.
    Roll Over, John Denver! "Annie's Song" just got bashed in an halarious way!

    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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