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    Quote Originally Posted by SleepyWitch View Post
    i'd like to laugh out loud but I'm at the student IT centre and the other students would think I'm crazy
    I think you're crazy too. I meant that to be a very serious piece.

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    some guys talk big
    mock, criticize and laugh at
    others, God being no exception
    they think they are all-knowledge,
    self-born like amoeba
    propel their way like paramecium
    and will be reborn like earthworms
    that there is no heaven or hell
    that they are immune from divine
    accountability
    nonsense!
    they live in fool's paradise
    know nothing, nothing!
    will they tell us if they have
    ever seen the teeth of a termite,
    the limbs of a snake,
    the nose of an ant?
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    To Beauty in Chains
    mazHur

    nothing attracts more
    than beauty veiled
    beauty when exposed
    just loses its charm
    farther deep down the skin
    it's all filth and crap;
    How about then
    hiding behind a veil
    a burqah, my love?
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    When asked how World War III would be fought, Einstein replied that he didn't know. But he knew how World War IV would be fought: With sticks and stones.
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    For I am the designated one
    he who was indicated by the prophecy
    the one who will lead the children of Kaw
    Into a land of efficacy

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    This is what it looks like when I try to write a poem in less than an hour
    I know what lifes about
    I take what it gives, which might be doubt
    I wanna take children to visit the pied piper's house
    I'm lazy but I don't like to slouch
    That's why my back doesn't drown down on the couch
    I know of no way called the promised route
    All things are like one, but not part of Tao
    Or whatever word you have for destiny farther down
    Flowing like a river
    With beauty glowing like guenhwyvar
    Idealism can be like that
    It's like The Wall you must fight back
    Tear it down just to get your life back
    I hate poetry because most of what I write's crap
    No figurative meaning I'll up-front use white crack
    My metaphors suck like when your hair's in bike hats
    My meter's so off but I know some trite facts
    I don't like when when I'm bad at stuff so spite that

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    There, thats a bad poem, a poem with no words.
    To say that literature is dying is to say that the world is dying.

    " 'The most important part of poetry is structure!' one student answers. ' No! The most important part of poetry is sound.' Another retorts. 'No! The most important part of poetry is rhyme!' says the last. 'No!" Says the teacher, ' The most important part of poetry is the meaning, no structure, nor sound nor rhyme alone can define poetry, combine them all and you get meaning.'

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    Quote Originally Posted by blp View Post
    spit on the hop gog pop rock shock jock
    shappetty shop shop shag shrug lug glug
    Go for it! The new car can be yours
    You've just got to believe
    and get lucky on a spin of the wheel
    don't worry, just do what you feel
    walk on your hands and wave with your feet
    Hi!
    Sorry to see you looking so low.
    you're so damn good at these blp

    this one made me chuckle out loud
    Last edited by Il Penseroso; 02-20-2008 at 08:28 PM.
    and somehow a dog
    has taken itself & its tail considerably away
    into the mountains or sea or sky, leaving
    behind: me, wag.
    - John Berryman

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    Quote Originally Posted by Il Penseroso View Post
    you're so damn good at these blp

    this one made me chuckle out loud
    Thanks, Penser. Means a lot coming from you.
    Last edited by blp; 02-24-2008 at 12:28 PM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Oniw17 View Post
    This is what it looks like when I try to write a poem in less than an hour
    I know what lifes about
    I take what it gives, which might be doubt
    I wanna take children to visit the pied piper's house
    I'm lazy but I don't like to slouch
    That's why my back doesn't drown down on the couch
    I know of no way called the promised route
    All things are like one, but not part of Tao
    Or whatever word you have for destiny farther down
    Flowing like a river
    With beauty glowing like guenhwyvar
    Idealism can be like that
    It's like The Wall you must fight back
    Tear it down just to get your life back
    I hate poetry because most of what I write's crap
    No figurative meaning I'll up-front use white crack
    My metaphors suck like when your hair's in bike hats
    My meter's so off but I know some trite facts
    I don't like when when I'm bad at stuff so spite that
    hehe, this sounds like a rap song

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    Jubert de Schubert
    has eaten too much camembert
    he has so expanded his girth
    he must now wear a skirt

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    Jubert de Schubert
    has eaten too much camembert
    now he is shaped like a pear
    and has nothing to wear

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    the poet bee el pee
    has eaten too much LSD
    now his brain's shaped like a sponge
    and his poems come out strongé [to be pronounced with a French accent]

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    I seenk you mean 'strahnj', non, Sleepy? Mais oui, for ah am zee expert when it cahms to wrahting in a Fransh acsohn.

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    yep, that's exactly what I meant

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    C'est vrai que c'est une bon idée
    d'essayer de parler en Français
    Mais si vous n'avez pas ç'apprené
    you has a petit problem.

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