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    Internal nebulae TheFifthElement's Avatar
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    Super-fluidity

    Touch the moment.

    Time is still,
    it waits enraptured
    by the flow.

    Hear the voice.

    That speaks in
    music, tones and
    undertones and
    beats.

    Smell the rain.

    In colours,
    blue or black;
    in memory,
    in motion.

    Taste the edge.

    It tastes of nothing.

    See yourself.

    Stardust coalescing,
    collective open
    dreams.

    Enter the space.

    You are time
    and space, and
    space and time
    are You.

    Touch the moment.




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    What is so lovely about this plyon, is the arrangement of the words give the illusion that this collumn is a twisted one. For shape it is your best so far!

    Some of us laugh
    Some of us cry
    Some of us smoke
    Some of us lie
    But it's all just the way
    that we cope with our lives...

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    Again Fifth. I wish you would put these poems to music. I loved it.
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    This is truly beautiful, Fifth.

    Quote Originally Posted by TheFifthElement View Post

    Hear the voice.

    That speaks in
    music, tones and
    undertones and
    beats.


    The entire piece "speaks in music" to me.
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    Internal nebulae TheFifthElement's Avatar
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    Pen, I will never escape the pylon poetry!

    Thank you Poppy & Cdn. I'm rubbish at music (my instrument of choice is a kazoo!) but I'm glad you liked the poem
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