Very good!
I actually like the long lines, for some reason they remind me of Allen Ginsbergs "Howl" with its long lines and repititions.
The metaphor of chewing paper is both simple and deep.
Though I still like "Mister" better, this one is very straight-forward, personal and passionate
The Moments of Dominion
That happen on the Soul
And leave it with a Discontent
Too exquisite — to tell —
-Emily Dickinson
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TVW8GCnr9-I
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ckGIvr6WVw4
An interesting find from days past... enjoyed.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Love this style of writing! Written with a clarity about how bitter life can be. Images are vibrant!
Love this. Really love it. It's amazing how busy the poetry thread was in 2007.
Fantastic!!!
"...the ramblings of a narcissistic, self-obsessed, deranged mind."
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Wasn't it ?... Strolling through the past: Some wonderful poetry in the main Poetry Forum and its sub-forum - it's been a delight.Originally Posted by tonywalt
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
I do that too..
Apple renders heaven's day, splendidly.
Nice minimalist poem
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor
who am I but a stitch in time
what if I were to bare my soul
would you see me origami
7-8-2015
Thank you so much!
In fact it is a part of a 4-line poem.
The apple renders
Heaven’s day, tenderly;
The leaves are scattered
About the wood-land splendidly.
It was written after a rain.
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