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    My ideal world

    My ideal world

    My ideal world is a world that cares
    A world that accepts and a world that doesnít stare

    A place that I can be just me
    A place for all and a place to be free

    Somewhere I can belong and fit in
    Somewhere Iím wanted and somewhere I donít get tossed in the bin

    Full of people that I can love and be loved by
    People who donít laugh and people that donít make me cry

    A planet where everyone is treated the same
    A planet that doesnít fight and a planet that has no shame

    Does my ideal world exist? The answer is unclear
    But one thing I know, itís sure as hell not here

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    Hi madrox

    Your words were very thought provoking and I wish there was such a place. Some people have a lot to answer for in the way that they treat others. I am sure many people could relate to your words.

    Take care.........Sue

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    NIIIICK!!! I LOVE the last two lines, I'm glad to see you ended it in such a great way. It's awesome!
    He thinks by infection, catching an opinion like a cold - John Ruskin.

    If I wanted to hear the beat of your heart, I'd rip it out and hold it to my ear.

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    my world

    my sweetest world is my home
    i return here after whwerever i roam
    i see glowing faces of my children
    which make me forgot my worries
    when my wife smiles to see us
    we feel flying in a heavenly bus

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    hIghwAy 2 hELL
    My Home:
    is my HELL


    Nice poem Madrox.

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