itsy-bitsy haiku

[amuse]

think koa's seen this on The Crossed Keys (no not the wedding site). also isagel. wish i could get to your site ihrocks, but comp isn't behaving...this is a few months old. almost used it for my sig but that would be annoying.
(historical note: wrote this after leaving forum as az. had stopped writing. realized one day would have to again, to my dismay at the time.)


…dragging bruised arteries from this vessel - from a picture in my head of light green pottery on a bureau, ordinarily a safe place to cloister one's dishes/wishes:

blood spills the secrets
run out my heart cannot hide
in this tilted bowl

[Uncle Lar]

As I think and type,
I wonder what will be ripe
for posting Haiku.

[flory]

I like the itsy-bitsy haiku

I am new on this list.....I posted a Haiku that I wrote, I would like replies of what you think.......

[flory]

I guess I did something wrong on the last post......sorry....

How do I find my post i did make? gone away.....far away

Boo Hoo !!!!!!

flory

[Uncle Lar]

Hi, Flory!

To find your Haiku, please follow these steps:

1. Left-click once on “Literature Network Forums.”
2. Scroll down to the bottom of the screen.
3. If you are logged in, your name will appear under “Currently Active Users.”
4. Left-click once on your name.
5. Scroll down to the “Forum Info” section.
6. Left-click once on “Find all posts by Flory.”
7. Look at your postings.

Have a great day, Flory!



Sincerely,

Uncle Lar

[healthyalt]

five bits on first part
seven sections on second
third has five pieces

[blp]

I like the line in italics best, but it's all good.

[amuse]

thank you blp. btw, need to start coming here more, have been thinking of lines, smashings, smatterings, but haven't written them down, and by the next day -

well.

i see what you mean about the italics.

[kiz_paws]

Does anyone know what is going on in this thread? Or is it another haiku thread that we have overlooked? **blinks in wonder**

[prema]

Seems to me it was Amuse who tried to start it a long time ago,
ending with:
in this tilted bowl (I`ll pick that one up):
lots of flowers used to be
now there are just snails

(it should maybe be BUT instead of just?)

[breathtest]

now there are just snails
born to this earth without pain
and without knowledge

[redEnrapt]

moist skin slithering
silvery threads following
slow nature movements

their bodies like tongues
lapping up the world around
watch them as they glide

gentle receptors
delicately seek ahead
stretched antenna eyes